ORDER OF OPERATIONS

9/23/2020

Today, students started their Plant I.D. projects by getting together with their groups and dividing up the work with each of their group members. They are respecting indigenous traditions of learning about nature and their environments. This will help them appreciate nature and their communities on a deeper level. In math, they started learning about order of operations and also started their unit on paragraph writing by learning about engaging hooks. We are starting to get comfortable with our daily routines and our way of learning! Keep it up!

IMPORTANT:

Keep up with the daily work! Don't fall behind! Complete your daily 'POST A RESPONSE' assignments by following the success criteria!
Bring clothes for PE every Wednesday and Friday.

LEARNING:
1.) MATH:

Review this video on order of operations.
Review Order of Operations Rap Song!
PLAY THESE EXTENSION GAMES:
Order of Operations Online Game 1 | Order of Operations Online Game 2

2.) ART/COLLAGE:

Make sure you have ALL your materials for your collage at school tomorrow. (Pictures, 3d object, paper, things you cut out from magazines, etc)

3.) POST A RESPONSE:

During today's read aloud, we learned more about Carley and her relationship with Mrs. Murphy.
It seems as though she is starting to trust her more than she did compared to when she first arrived at her house.
LEARNING INTENTION: I can write a standard paragraph (intro, body, and conclusion)
SUCCESS CRITERIA:
1.) Paragraph format
- intro (engaging hook - Think back to what Mr. Bains taught you today!)
- body (supporting sentences and examples)
- conclusion (sums/ties up what you wrote)
2.) Include one example why Carley did not trust Mrs. Murphy at first and explain why she didn't trust her.
3.) Include one example why Carley started to trust Mrs. Murphy from today's read aloud.
4.) Check for the givens/conventions of writing (spelling, grammar, sentence structure, capitals, and punctuation) before posting your paragraph.
5.) Read two other paragraphs and give two people something to improve on based on the above criteria. For example: Hey Joseph! I like your paragraph. It was very well written. My feedback for you is to make sure you have an engaging hook (intro) because you did not include one.

VIDEO LINKS:
Math Antics - Order of Operations
Order of Operations Rap Song

Mika

9/23/2020 02:38:52 pm

First

Mr. Hong

9/23/2020 03:07:56 pm

@ Mika - Thanks for stopping by! Do your best to complete the daily PARS. If the PAR is based on something done in class, feel free to adjust the written assignment. For example, today, you can write about what might cause a person to not trust a new foster family and how they might gain trust for them over time.

Joseph

9/23/2020 03:01:36 pm

Second

Dylan

9/23/2020 03:28:49 pm

Third

Seth

9/23/2020 03:30:18 pm

Trust in modern-day Society is hard to get. People are all stuck in their own world, Ms. Murphy tried to get the trust of Carly. Carly had other plans though. Convincing herself that the Murphy’s were evil lying people that wanted her gone. I just seemed so fake to her, she had grown up with mean, abusive parents. Her mind changed after her mind after Ms. Murphy “protected” her from the police officer.

Nathan

9/23/2020 03:32:59 pm

Well done but a few mistakes. It's Mrs. Murphy everyone! Not Ms. Murphy or Ms Murphy. Also society isn't capitalized.

lars

9/23/2020 03:33:36 pm

you felt so fake?
also what does Her mind changed after her mind mean

Annika

9/23/2020 04:58:46 pm

@Seth Im pretty sure that it's Carley

Mr. Hong

9/23/2020 05:04:20 pm

@ Seth - I like your hook! It got me interested in reading your paragraph! My suggestion is to be less conversational in your writing. Use some transition words like, "For example, ".

seth’s redo

9/23/2020 03:33:29 pm

Trust in modern-day Society is hard to get. People are all stuck in their own world, Ms. Murphy tried to get the trust of Carly. Carly had other plans though, Convincing herself that the Murphy’s were evil lying people that wanted her gone. It just seemed so fake to her. she had grown up with mean, abusive parents, and had gotten use to it thinking it was normal. Her mind changed after Ms. Murphy “protected” her from the police officer. And ultimately won Carly’s trust.

Seth Redo’s redo

9/23/2020 03:34:58 pm

Trust in modern-day society is hard to get. People are all stuck in their own world, Ms. Murphy tried to get the trust of Carly. Carly had other plans though, Convincing herself that the Murphy’s were evil lying people that wanted her gone. It just seemed so fake to her. she had grown up with mean, abusive parents, and had gotten use to it thinking it was normal. Her mind changed after Ms. Murphy “protected” her from the police officer. And ultimately won Carly’s trust.

Nathan

9/23/2020 03:41:14 pm

Not redos but drafts. Also, you can't start a sentence with 'and'

Dylan

9/23/2020 03:46:11 pm

@Seth - you spelt Carley wrong. It is with an E

lars

9/23/2020 03:56:16 pm

@seth- nice job, the last redo is great
@nathan- you can start a sentence with and, look it up

Taiki

9/23/2020 06:01:03 pm

@Seth you should check the capitals of the fifth sentence.

kyle

9/23/2020 09:06:47 pm

Really nice paragraph. But the word convincing doesn't need a capital since its a comma at the front. (*^o^*)

Kyle Chen

9/23/2020 09:12:20 pm

I mean there not Its. sorry :<

Nathan

9/23/2020 03:39:45 pm

Trustworthy is not a common thing you can find laying around (I learned that from experience). Carley didn't trust Mrs. Murphy for that she thinks that she is aean person and a weird one too. She thinks that Mrs. Murphy being nice was weird and that she would rather sleep in the basement of a smoking foster mother. But when she sees that Mrs. Murphy cares about her, she doesn't feel as out of place anymore and that she can trust her. Carley Conners is a fictional person but these events happen in the real world whether you like it or not. Good luck finding good trustworthy friends and I'll see you tomorrow!

Aisli

9/23/2020 03:53:24 pm

Your P.A.R does not have a hook. c;

lars

9/23/2020 03:59:45 pm

nice paragraph but the right grammar is "trust is not a common thing you can find laying around" not "Trustworthy is not a common thing you can find laying around". Also, "for that she thinks" should be "because she thinks" or "for she thinks".

Samantha

9/23/2020 04:36:07 pm

You should check your spelling again, there are a few typos!

Mr. Hong

9/23/2020 05:05:36 pm

@ Nathan - Your hook is great! My suggestion is to change your first word to 'Trustworthiness'.

Seth

9/23/2020 03:41:07 pm

Well done there a few mistakes such as mean nat aean

Nathan

9/23/2020 03:42:07 pm

oof

Dylan

9/23/2020 03:41:52 pm

Relationships can change overtime, you can earn someone’s trust, or lose someone’s trust. So today, I’m gonna write about how Carley’s relationship with Ms. Murphy changed. At first, when Carley moved in with Ms. Murphy, she felt uncomfortable and felt like it was all fake, since she grew up in a family where her parents were abusive and cruel. She felt so uncomfortable, she made Ms. Murphy cry. She started trusting to be kinder to Ms. Murphy. And Ms. Murphy

Nathan

9/23/2020 03:43:57 pm

Again...It's Ms. Murphy :| . Another thing is that the ending is cut off :|

Annika

9/23/2020 04:55:35 pm

@Dylan it's good but the ms is a Mrs because she is married.

Mr. Hong

9/23/2020 05:06:45 pm

@ Dylan - Thanks for your engaging hook! One thing you could improve on would be to add a few more details. Why did she feel comfortable? What did Mrs. Murphy do to make her trust her more?

Dylan

9/23/2020 05:57:07 pm

Ok I’ll try to do so.

Magnus

9/23/2020 06:25:47 pm

Some feedback that you should use is to finish your work, because I noticed that the end is cut of.

Dylan

9/24/2020 03:32:34 pm

@Magnus - That was because I accidentally pressed submit before I was finished. It is continued below.

lars

9/25/2020 05:31:56 pm

great paragraph except for a grammar issue: "She started trusting to be kinder to Ms. Murphy" should be "She started trusting Mrs. Murphy" or "She started being kinder to Mrs. Murphy".

Dylan

9/23/2020 03:43:22 pm

And when Ms. Murphy protected her from the police man and held her hand she felt more trusting of Ms. Murphy. Peoples personalities can change and we have seen that with Carley.

Nathan

9/23/2020 03:45:16 pm

Like I said with Seth, no sentences with 'and'.

Dylan

9/23/2020 03:48:11 pm

@Nathan, you actually are able to, it is just that teachers of younger grades tell up you not to. But it is perfectly fine if you do.

Tyson

9/25/2020 08:35:34 am

Even though and is perfectly fine, it is not as formal as a sentence without and so it’s better to start a sentence without it

Magnus

9/23/2020 06:26:25 pm

Yay, you finished it!

Dylan

9/23/2020 03:44:19 pm

Oops, pressed submit before I was finished

Aisli

9/23/2020 03:45:07 pm

CARLY HAS CHANGED! Carly’s bond with Ms. Murphy has grown stronger, and so has Carly bond with Ms. Murphy’s sons! Carly is now starting to realize that Ms. Murphy does truly care about her. Carly was stuck in her world where she was no-one just someone that can be thrown around, no-one to care for her. Then the unfortunate happen when she had gotten beat, but every downside has an upside. She met Ms. Murphy, the one to pull Carly out of her vision of the world. Thanks for reading!

Nathan

9/23/2020 03:46:38 pm

Ahem. Who writes Carly???

Aisli

9/23/2020 03:50:32 pm

I saw my mistake before you posted your comment or reply

Aisli

9/23/2020 03:47:10 pm

In the second
sentence i meant to type “Carly’s” not “Carly”

Dylan

9/23/2020 03:50:05 pm

@Aisli - when you say no-one, you need a comma afterwards

Trevor

9/23/2020 08:23:05 pm

And Aisli, Carley is spelled with an E

lars

9/24/2020 03:30:57 pm

"Then the unfortunate happen when she had gotten beat" should be "Then the unfortnate happened when she was beaten". nice paragraph other wise though

Aisli's redo

9/25/2020 05:34:14 pm

CARLEY HAS CHANGED! Carley’s bond with Ms. Murphy has grown stronger, and so has Carley's bond with Ms. Murphy’s sons! Carley is now starting to realize that Ms. Murphy does truly care about her. Carley was stuck in her world where she was no-one just someone that can be thrown around, no-one to care for her. Then the unfortunate happen when she had gotten beat, but every downside has an upside. She met Ms. Murphy, the one to pull Carley out of her vision of the world. Thanks for reading!

Aisli's redo response

9/25/2020 05:35:29 pm

did i do it this time?

lars

9/25/2020 08:40:09 pm

a lot better but still that grammar mistake

Isaac

9/23/2020 03:52:29 pm

The example for when Carley wouldn't trust Mrs. Murphy, is when she first came and didn't feel comfortable being at the Murphy's, and the she didn't know why Mrs. Murphy was being nice. The example for when Carley trusted Mrs. Murphy. Is when the police officer came to the house and Carley was being protected by Mrs. Murphy and she started to trust her.

Keira

9/23/2020 04:36:12 pm

@Isaac - Your paragraph does not have a introduction. In this sentence "The example for when Carley trusted Mrs. Murphy. Is" A full stop is not needed and a capital letter for the "Is" is unnecessary too.

lars

9/23/2020 03:54:17 pm

fifth
For today's PAR we had to come up with examples of when Carly did not trust Mrs. Murphy to start and when she was beginning to. An example of Carley not trusting Mrs. Murphy at first was when she told her that she knew Mrs. Murphy was being fake with all the nice stuff. An example of when she was starting to trust her was that she is starting to be nicer by plating with Michael Eric and the other boy.

lars

9/23/2020 04:04:01 pm

WHAT IM NOT FIFTH SO MANY PEOPLE COMMENTED BEFORE I POSTED

sebastian

9/23/2020 04:27:12 pm

Lars I like how you made your paragraph detailed and descriptive but you misspelled Carley with Carly in the first sentence

Dylan

9/23/2020 04:09:06 pm

I can’t play the game because I need to make an acc

sebastian

9/23/2020 04:24:43 pm

today we read One for the Murphy's, Mrs. Murphy tried to get Carley's trust but Carley didn't trust her with all the nice things and the beginning when she met her. Carley didn't trust her because she was nice to her and a example is when Mrs. Murphy bought the nice stuff for her. an example of Carley gaining trust was when Carley decided to be nicer by playing super hero's an bad guy with the two foster or step brothers and Mrs. Murphy protected her from the police for a bit.

Samantha

9/23/2020 04:34:02 pm

Really good paragraph! Just make sure to check your capitals! :)

Keira

9/23/2020 04:37:44 pm

@Sebastian - The paragraph and the content is good but you've forgotten the conclusion.

Magnus

9/23/2020 06:28:50 pm

Feedback that you should use: Remember, always check the givens.

Keira

9/23/2020 04:33:40 pm

Today, while reading 'One For The Murphy's' with the class, a fascinating change happens to Carley as the story progresses. A police officer visits Carley's new foster home and is asked questions. She seems to be backed into a corner when her 'Step-Father' is mentioned, Mrs. Murphy comes to the rescue and pushes the police officer out of her home. Carley is stunned by Mrs. Murphy's words and suddenly feels warm inside her heart. Carley has started to feel safe around Mrs. Murphy, a ray of trust has shined upon Carley. As the story continues, will Carley be able to trust her heart and mind in Mrs. Murphy's hands?

lars

9/24/2020 03:53:41 pm

great paragraph but stepfather is not capitalized and doesnt have quotes or a dash

Roen

9/23/2020 04:44:48 pm

The fact that Ms.Murphy is being nice and protecting Carley is very heart warming, she totally didn't have to adopt her but she did, Carley did not trust Ms.Murphy at first but considering what we read today we all know it is changing. I think Carley is starting to like Ms.Murphy and the kids! Except for Daniel or something...

Luiza

9/23/2020 05:04:59 pm

Nice but what was one of the examples for how she started to trust her?

Ryo

9/24/2020 07:59:56 am

Where is the intro?

Annika

9/23/2020 04:48:35 pm

When we read "One For The Murphy's" Carly was sent to the Murphy's and she did not like them. When she first arrived she was sus about them being to kind to her so she was on high guard. Mrs. Murphy was trying to get her trust and i know how hard it is for someone to earn you're trust its hard until something happens and that person trying to get you're trust covers/protect's you during a situation than you start giving them some of you're trust like what happened with Mrs. Murphy protecting her from the cop. What happened with me was kinda similar, me and my friends where playing a game and than some kid started to pick on me so one of the girl's i did not like at the time and she did not like me either ( now she is one of my very close friend's) out of nowhere she protected me form the kid that was picking on me and than we became friend's. My point is that it is hard to gain someones trust until they do something for you so that's my point of view. Thanks for reading.

Annika

9/23/2020 04:49:33 pm

Srry i meant Carley

Luiza

9/23/2020 05:02:47 pm

Great paragraph but remember to do capitals like I instead of i.

Luiza

9/23/2020 04:54:34 pm

Trust is hard to get, so once you have it make sure not to break it. In the story One for the Murphy’s, Carley found it hard to trust people after what happened with her mother and her. So when she moved to the Murphy’s house she was fixed on the idea that the Murphy’s were bad people and shouldn’t be trusted. One day a police officer came to their house and started asking questions about how her parents were abusing her. Mrs Murphy stepped in and protected Carley and told the officer to leave. This made Carley feel like she could trust Mrs Murphy because she would always defend her. I think Carley will start trusting people again, but I wonder if she will still trust her own mother.

Samantha

9/23/2020 04:55:58 pm

While reading "One for the Murphy's" I realized that it took many pages and many chapters for Carley to trust Ms. Murphy and to accept her kindness. I can understand why. She didn't have the best parents, and wasn't in the best environment. Wearing clothes from the salvation army, Living with Dennis, the abusive stepfather it was most likely hard for Carley even though she might not have realized it. When Ms. Murphy stepped in to take care of Carley she did not trust her. She thought of Ms. Murphy as a mean mother that wasn't actually nice like Ms. Murphy was faking her kindness, she thought that she'd have to be the "Modern Cinderella" of the house. Even though she snapped at Ms. Murphy, was really rude to the waiter at the restaurant. Carley was forgiven and even stood up by Ms. Murphy when a police officer wasn't being nice to Carley. Carley realized that Ms. Murphy was not a fake nice mother, or a evil stepmother that will turn her into "Modern Cinderella". Ms. Murphy was genuinely just really nice and caring, and Carley realized that! The book really twists and I enjoy a lot of it and hope to read more!

Taiki

9/23/2020 05:55:59 pm

Trust is hard to achieve, but you can lose it very easily. In the book One For The Murphy's, Carley was having difficulties trusting Mrs. Murphy, because Mrs. Murphy is very kind to her and she couldn't believe that was real, making her to think that the "not so good" living at her former house was better. From today's read aloud, I noticed that because Mrs. Murphy defended Carley from taking her to the police station by the officer, Carley started to trust Mrs. Murphy and didn't want to leave the place. I am hoping that the trust that Mrs. Murphy gained will not be lost. Thank you for reading!

Magnus

9/23/2020 06:12:43 pm

In stories, characters change throughout the book. For example, in a book called One For The Murphy’s, Carley had to stay with a foster parent because her mom was in the hospital. At first, Carley did not trust Mrs. Murphy because she was being too nice. For example, Mrs. Murphy would ask what Carley wanted and spent a lot of money on her. Then we learned that the longer Carley stays with Mrs. Murphy, the more she trusts her. After reading parts of the book, I knew that Carley trusts Mrs. Murphy, did you?

Ryo

9/24/2020 07:53:05 am

Good paragraph, but where is the one example why Carley started to trust Mrs. Murphy?

kyle

9/23/2020 06:46:37 pm

While reading the book called One For The Murphys, we started seeing some changes about Carley. At first when Carley first went to the Murphys home she felt kind of uncomfortable and she couldn't really trust Mrs. Murpphy. One example of Carley not trusting Mrs. Murphy is when Mrs. Murphy was being so kind to her, like buying her new cloths and eating at a restaurant. She didn't feel comfortable because her real parents wouldn't go to get her any new cloths or eat out side. But after reading the book today, things have changed. When the police officer came and asked Carley some questions about the night when Carley and her mom went to the hospital, Carly didn't really know how to answer those answer because if she said anything wrong, her mother might end up in jail. But when Mrs. Murphy heard what they where saying, she new that those questions wasn't comfortable for Carly. So she protected her by asking the officer to ask Dennis the step dad rather than Carley. After the officer left Carley now know that she can trust Mrs. Murphy.

Seth

9/23/2020 07:19:47 pm

@kyle She now knew not know

kyle

9/23/2020 08:48:30 pm

Thank you for the feedback (*^o^*) !!!!!!

Seth

9/23/2020 08:04:27 pm

I can’t find the math games

Trevor

9/23/2020 08:39:34 pm

Trust has to be earned. You don't usually meet anyone and immediately trust them. This is shown in Carley's relationship with Mrs. Murphy. When she first meets Mrs. Murphy she thinks that Mrs. Murphy is fake because she is so happy. Carley is not used to people being so friendly. So Carley doesn't trust Mrs. Murphy. How Carley feels about her situation does not help. She was betrayed by her own mom and doesn't know why someone else's mom would care so much. When Mrs. Murphy defends Carley from the Police Officer's questions, Carley then begins to trust her. It helps that Carley feels bad for making Mrs. Murphy cry. When you make someone cry, and they don't give up on you, it shows that they care about you. By the end of the book I think that Carley will trust Mrs. Murphy completely. Trust has to be earned by being there for someone and doing nice things for them.

Simone

9/23/2020 09:19:48 pm

Trust is delicate, and often takes time to build on to it. In my paragraph I’ll be telling you the reasons why Carley didn’t trust Mrs Murphy and how she slowly began trusting her. Carley first didn’t trust Mrs Murphy because of how perfect she was. So basically imagine someone being the parent of your dreams and how that basically un-possible and how even you wont trust them on sight. Carley’s relationship with Mrs Murphy grows slowly and slightly and is extremely clear to us when she “hides” behind Mrs Murphy in the chapter about the police officer and his questioning. That was a journey of trust. Remember that trust is easy to shatter and hard to build. (Sry for sending so late)

Ryo

9/24/2020 07:33:01 am

Why didn't Carley believe Mrs.Murphy at first? Well I am going to tell you why. First, there was an incident with her stepdad, Dennis. She thought she was a bad guy, and that was true. Dennis tried to catch Carley and when she was running towards her mom, she got caught by the foot and she said that she got Carley to Dennis. She felt betrayed by her own mom. That was why she didn't believe Mrs.Murphy. She started believing her when the policeman came and she was surrounded with a tunami of questions. Carley said that Mrs.Murphy can leave, and when she leaves, and Carley feel that she miss her. The inscident with Dennis and when the policeman came was why she didn't belive Mrs.Murphy at first and why she is begenning to believe Mrs.Murphy.

Tyson

9/24/2020 10:49:10 am

My Hong I have a question I don’t know really what to do for some pars because I haven’t read anything about one for the Murphy’s

Mason

9/24/2020 01:34:29 pm

Trusting someone can be difficult. One may not trust their foster family because of trauma from the past, as Carley has experienced an haunting incident having to do with her stepdad. More examples can be in a child’s imagination, there are many fictional films where the substitute parents of a character treats them in an abusive manner. Since Carley is a child of divorce, she may feel discomfort being in a new family with unfamiliar people. Trust has a progression period and it takes time for someone to trust another. In my opinion, I think the further we get in the book, the more Carley will trust Mrs. Murphy and her family.

Mason

9/24/2020 01:38:29 pm

Feedback would be appreciated! :)

Mika

9/24/2020 08:14:11 pm

I read One of the Murphy’s today and I realized that trust really doesn’t come easily. As you may know, Mrs. Murphy offered herself in many ways to make Carley feel more comfortable, but Carley just saw the bad in the beginning. Like in the restaurant, Mrs. Murphy was being understanding and just trying to order some food and be close, but Carley took advantage and went to see how much buttons she could push. Though, soon after on the 6th day with the Murphys, Mrs. Murphy stands up for her when the police are directing that Carley was the cause of her dad abusing her. After this happened, Carley couldn’t help but feel closer and protected around Mrs. Murphy.

Isa

9/25/2020 10:38:25 am

We were continuing to read the “One of the Murphy” today. Since Mrs. Murphy started to take care of Carley, Carley has always disliked Mrs. Murphy because she wanted her own mother to take care of her like this. Even if Mr. Murphy is kind to her, take her to the mall to buy so many clothes, or take her to a restaurant for lunch. But Carley still don’t like he. Even talking nonsense to the waiter. In this mood, I can understand, because when I was a child, my mom and dad were very busy and didn’t have any time to take care of me, so my grandma took care of me and pick up me from school every day. Like Carley’ s parents are not around. But let someone who doesn’t know him take care of himself. It does take a time to adapt. But in chapter 11. When Carley eavesdrop the conversation of the police and Mr. Murphy. She heard Mr. Murphy cried for him. But Mrs. Murphy didn’t angry to Carley, instead he helped her explain. Then Carley's attitude is change. She began to accept Mr. Murphy and even played with the police. This is the result of treating people sincerely.

Melissa

9/28/2020 07:54:58 am

When we were reading “one for the Murphy's” on Thursday, what happened was that Carly didn’t really like Mrs Murphy because she was always so nice to her and Carly wasn’t used to that, but then when the policemen came in and Mrs Murphy protected her, she began to trust her more.

Mason

10/7/2020 08:36:27 pm

Autumn is possibly my favorite season, the gentle breeze and colorful leaves are some signs of autumn. I think autumn is so great because of its qualities, most mosquitos have already died in autumn, and autumn is also when you can cool off from summer. Autumn is also when many fresh fruits and vegetables are ripe and ready to be harvested. The sound of stepping on dry leaves is very fun as well, and best of all, you know that some holidays are coming soon! Autumn also has its weak points, rain, allergies, and shorter days pop up as autumn arrives. However, there are many worse things that can happen in different seasons which makes autumn a very good season.

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