PEER ASSESSMENTS/FEEDBACK

12/14/2016

1.) SCIENCE:

Make your edits/revisions based on your peer assessments.
Final 'SCALE OF LARGE' projects due tomorrow.

2.) POST A RESPONSE:

Based on the learning intentions (on your criteria sheet), what did you learn from this project.
What is the importance of peer feedback?
How does feedback from your peers, based on the assignment criteria, help you learn?
Give one other student feedback on their grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitals, vocabulary, or sentence structure.
Edit/revise your original post based on the feedback you receive or a self-assessment.

VIDEO LINKS:
To be updated

Vera

12/14/2016 03:17:01 pm

FIRST!!!!!!!

Logan

12/14/2016 04:23:00 pm

Lol I was first because I was the first to do the PAR!!!! Maybe next time.😜😛

Jagger

12/14/2016 03:17:11 pm

First

Jagger

12/14/2016 03:17:50 pm

Sorry second

Shaan

12/14/2016 03:57:53 pm

Third

Logan

12/14/2016 04:21:13 pm

I learned how to make circles with scissors and paper.

Peer feedback is important because it gives you something to work on to improve on your project.

Richard

12/14/2016 05:21:25 pm

You only learned from this 2 week work, how to make circles

Logan

12/14/2016 09:08:46 pm

Is this feedback?

Shaan

12/14/2016 08:33:51 pm

Mr.Hong is talking about the learning intention on the criteria sheet and the L.I: is I can display my understanding of scale and how large the universe is, And I can create a model to present my understanding.

Richard

12/14/2016 04:27:44 pm

Importance Of Peer Feedback
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I learned from the science project is how small we are compared to the ENTER universe. We are so small compared to Jupiter and its not even a STAR. And earth looks like a marble to a bed to Jupiter. The Sun makes Jupiter look like a pebble, imagen sires, that thing's huge!

The purpose of peer feedback is to help people learn. It is not used to to say someone sucks or anything. Feedback helps me learn a ton, same with a criteria sheet. Mainly because my last years teacher never gave us criteria or as much feedback as Mr. Hong does atm.

Richard (revised)

12/14/2016 08:47:49 pm

L.I: I can show my understanding of how big the universe is compared to me.

I learned from the science project is how small we are compared to the ENTER universe. We are so small compared to Jupiter and its not even a STAR. And earth looks like a marble to a bed to Jupiter. The Sun makes Jupiter look like a pebble, imagen sires, that thing's huge!
===========Importance of Peer Feedback===========
The purpose of peer feedback is to help people learn. It is not used to to say someone sucks or anything. Feedback helps me learn a ton, same with a criteria sheet. Mainly because my last years teacher never gave us criteria or as much feedback as Mr. Hong does atm.

Richard

12/14/2016 05:19:06 pm

What if we don't bring 5 dollars of a gift for our secret Santa.

Shaan

12/14/2016 08:30:51 pm

Do you mean if you paid more money then five dollars? Because I paid 10 dollars.

Richard

12/14/2016 08:43:02 pm

No, i mean what if i told you my mom thinks "secret santa" is nonsense. And she refuses to give me five bucks.

Shaan

12/14/2016 09:14:16 pm

@ Richard I am sorry that I cant help if I could help you I would.

Mr. Hong

12/14/2016 09:37:08 pm

@ Richard - Please do not bring any money. Purchase a gift if possible. if you are unable to, please come and talk to me in private and I will take care of it.

Jacob

12/14/2016 05:32:38 pm

Peer Feed Back is good because it helps you understand how others look at your work.
And i learned that we a super small compared to the universe

DavidR

12/14/2016 05:36:07 pm

Mr.Hong u didnt telll me who my secret santa is...

Richard

12/14/2016 08:44:40 pm

Atleast i know who you'd like to be someones secret santa. Not me.
xD

Mr. Hong

12/14/2016 09:48:40 pm

@ David - You never lined up. I will tell you tomorrow.

Jaci

12/14/2016 06:29:22 pm

🌟👶🏻🍼Feedback🍼👶🏻🌟

Feedback Is important because if you make a spelling mistake and you don't see the error then your gonna want someone to read what you wrote to make sure all the grammar and punctuation is fine. I learned from this project that you have to manage your time properly and look over what you have done to see if generally everything is fine. I will be back later to revise what I wrote in the mean time I am gonna work as much as I can on my project :).

Elenoa

12/14/2016 07:37:04 pm

Peer feedback is good for you because it helps you build your improving skills and helps this to be more understanding and clear.

What I learned from this lesson and doing the project is " The scale of large" which means you should have learned how to measure this like in distance between things and the diameter .
*Extra*
Also that we as humans think we know sooooo ... much but if you think about it we are sooo... small compared to everything past our atmosphere . If there was life out there , somewhere ? What would they look like ? We have so many question to ask and that we are very ,very small and yet humans think that were all that and that were more then other things. I still don't get humans.

ben

12/14/2016 07:45:22 pm

What I learned from the space project is how big the universe it and how small I am to Earth and beyond. I also learned that what different sizes other planets would be if Earth got smaller. Next thing I learned is how to make circles with only 3 supplies (pencil,ruler,scissor) and also to measure the radius of the diameter which is also math that I learned.

Whats important about peer assessment from the criteria
Is that I will know my mistakes and learn from them or i can see what is wrong and can do better next time by taking feedback and try to do as requested.

ben

12/14/2016 07:46:57 pm

Revised
What I learned from the space project is how big the universe it and how small I am to Earth and beyond. I also learned that what different sizes other planets would be if Earth got smaller. Next thing I learned is how to make circles with only 3 supplies (pencil,ruler,scissor) and also to measure the radius of the diameter which is also math that I learned.

Whats important about peer assessment from the criteria
Is that I will know my mistakes and learn from them or I can see what is wrong and can do better next time by taking feedback and try to do as requested.

shaan

12/14/2016 07:58:16 pm

I found this Youtube video that say top 10 strangest planets should I post the link?

Shaan

12/14/2016 07:59:03 pm

One of the planets is made out of diamond.

Jesse

12/14/2016 08:07:52 pm

Feedback is important because you can see what you need to improve on.

Shaan

12/14/2016 08:22:21 pm

Hey Jesse how is your vacation hope you are having fun.

Dyamontae

12/14/2016 08:15:06 pm

I learned that it takes time to do projects and that I can also have a little fun while doing them.

Peer feedback is important because it'll help you make your project better it helps me learn by knowing the mistakes I have made so I can fix it and I can get a better grade

Shaan

12/14/2016 08:21:46 pm

L.I: - I can display my understanding of scale and how large the universe is. - I can create a model to present my understanding.

I learned how small I am compared to the universe and planets. We also learned how to create a model of how small we are compared to the universe and other stuff like planets, stars galaxies, and much more.

If you wondered why do we need peer feedback then I'll tell you why. When you receive peer feedback it helps you catch some mistakes that you didn't find and that helps you a lot. It helps me from getting minimally meeting to a meeting expectations. Now you know why peer feedback is useful.P.S thanks Siri for telling me how to spell some words lol.

Ashley

12/14/2016 08:23:39 pm

I learned how small we are to the universe.
Peer assessment helps me so I can get feedback and change all my mistakes for tomorrow!

King Logan

12/14/2016 09:12:22 pm

@ Ashley I think you should put a little more on the feedback part.
Maybe look at some other posts that your class mates have made and try to fix your PAR.

Jared

12/14/2016 09:38:46 pm

LI: I can clearly show and explain how small we are compared to the universe

DavidR

12/14/2016 09:42:41 pm

Mr.Hong is it OK if I don't post because I'm working on my science project at the moment

Chance

12/14/2016 10:03:24 pm

I learned how small I am in the universe. Also how to make circles even know I didn't use them. The importance of peer feedback is to learn what you need to fix. Also for you to get a little better. Say you are min meeting and if somebody gives you so feedback you can meet expections. Finally it helps by showing you what you need working on.

Chance

12/14/2016 10:06:13 pm

@Mr.Hong I might not be able to do the secret Santa thing because my dads truck broke down, and my mom is done the Christmas shoping , but I thought she wasn't. I thought you wanted to know because I said my mom wasn't done Christmas shoping.

Chance

12/14/2016 10:07:39 pm

Oh yea and one more thing

https://animoto.com/play/Vl2Ls04G9MZ5yV0nOCpsqA

That's my animoto do you think that's better.

Shmil

12/14/2016 10:20:13 pm

What I learned from this project is how small I am compared to the universe, and how many earths there are in one planet. The importance of peer feedback is so that the others can change what they have to change. The feedback I receive from people help me learn from my mistakes. For example... I did some incorrect spellings and grammars. They'll tell me so I would know.

Tyler

12/14/2016 10:39:46 pm

From this project i learned that we are all super small compared to the universe and peer assessment helps us pick up the things we missed from the criteria sheet so we can do what was asked of us and complete or projects accordingly

Avy

12/14/2016 10:48:38 pm

What i learned from this project is to see how small we are and how big the world around use. from the feedback my peer gave me i saw that i had al ot of spelling errors and my grammer was not the best

Jaci

12/15/2016 12:23:42 am

I forgot to say I don't have metal hangers and I had extra ortaments that where tiny but I don't know where the are ;(.

Shmil

12/15/2016 07:40:24 am

@Jaci - Don't worry. I'll give you some. :)

Shmil's mom

12/15/2016 10:49:30 am

Just reviewed all the comments and I can't help but express my appreciation to you Shmil for sharing:). Sharing is always the best.

To Shmil's classmates, congrats! You are all doing great. Good luck! Thanks Mr. Hong!

Xaviery

12/15/2016 05:15:41 am

I learned that I can display my understanding of scale and how large the universe is. I learned that I can create a model to present my understanding.
So that you can improve your project and work on the errors.
So that we can understand our learning.

Tamim

12/15/2016 08:18:20 am

I learned how to make circles and I learned how small we are compared to the universe and I learned a lot about the planets

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