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POWERFUL RESPONSE - OWNERSHIP

4/5/2022

CLICK ON IMAGE FOR RULE OF THIRDS

Today, students displayed a great deal of ownership in their learning. After editing/revising the powerful response criteria, students powered through and started writing. After about 15 minutes, all students had made serious progress on their powerful responses for their second picture books. I was impressed to say the least. Students are becoming much more independent in their learning which shows they will be ready for high school in September!

IMPORTANT:
1.) MAPPING: Due tomorrow. If you need more time, email Mr. Hong directly to request more time.

LEARNING/PLANNER:

1.) READING: Read 30 minutes.

2.) NOVEL APPROACH:

Click here for an extending quality example of a POWERFUL RESPONSE (When I was 8)

3.) ART:

Watch this video.
Click here to look at different examples of photos that use 'RULE OF THIRDS'.
Practice taking photos using 'RULE OF THIRDS' at home. We will have our formal lesson on rule of thirds in class tomorrow.

4.) MAPPING:

Due tomorrow.

5.) FRENCH:

Bring any videos or technology you need to work on your videos tomorrow.

6.) POST A RESPONSE:

We have seen a big shift in the learning in our class. Students are taking greater ownership of their learning. It is clear you have all learned how to become excellent learners this year!
When completing your PAR today, really think about the Big 6 Learning principles (learning intentions, success criteria, questions, self-assessments, peer assessments, and ownership)
LEARNING INTENTION: I can explain what it means to take ownership of my learning.
SUCCESS CRITERIA:
1.) PARAGRAPH FORMAT: intro/body/conclusion
2.) GIVENS/CONVENTIONS: spelling, capitals, sentence structure, grammar, and punctuation.
3.) BODY: Include 2 examples/points/evidence that show how you take ownership of your learning.
4.) SELF-ASSESSMENT: Complete a self-assessment using the above criteria and post a reply to your paragraph stating you did this and what you changed (if any).
5.) PEER-ASSESSMENT: Give one other student peer feedback and give them two things to improve on.
6.) REVISIONS: Post your revised paragraph based on your self/peer feedback.

VIDEO LINKS:
The Rule of Thirds

ASH

4/5/2022 10:15:39 am

1st

maya

4/5/2022 10:16:01 am

2nd

melissa

4/5/2022 10:16:20 am

3rd

angela

4/5/2022 10:16:28 am

Hayden

4/5/2022 10:16:45 am

5th

Shawn

4/5/2022 01:34:41 pm

6th

Jeremy

4/5/2022 03:37:24 pm

7th

Sam

4/5/2022 03:56:57 pm

“Excuse me Mr Hong can you please give me a few more examples about subtracting integers” “SAMUEL have you finished your home reading yet” “yep I completed it this morning”.
Ownership means to take responsibility over your learning and to advocate for what you need also use the big 6 learning principles and use success criteria.
I have ownership when I do my homework without being asked and not handing it in late.
Secondly I ask questions when I need help and not just sit their and not know what to do. As my ownership keeps improving I will become a unstoppable learning machine.

Brendan

4/5/2022 06:28:29 pm

@Sam- Good job Sam. You definitely improved on your ability to take ownership of your learning.

FEEDBACK: Check the GIVENS. You have a few punctuation mistakes in your writing. For example, there should be periods in between each phrase at the beginning of the paragraph.

Shawn

4/5/2022 05:52:46 pm

What is ownership? Onwership is to take ownership over your learning. thats why ownership is important.

Shawn

4/5/2022 05:53:13 pm

Spelt ownership wrong.
Add more detail

Kai

4/5/2022 06:09:38 pm

paragraph format is better. you only write 2 sentences

Winna

4/5/2022 06:18:48 pm

@Shawn you didn’t give two examples.

Winna

4/5/2022 06:17:46 pm

What does taking ownership of your learning mean? Why is it important? Taking ownership of your learning makes you an independent and responsible learner.
Taking ownership of your learning is important, because it offers the learner’s strengths and stretches. It also expresses what they know and understand. First, I can finish my homework or projects before the due date. Second, I can use teacher’s feedback to correct and improve.
In conclusion, taking ownership of your learning is important. You can learn and improve from it.

ASH

4/5/2022 07:24:50 pm

@Winna- Great job!

FEEDBACK 1: Make the conclusion engaging
FEEDBACK 2: In the sentence " I can finish my homework or projects before the due date." It sounds like a learning intention not taking ownership.
FEEDBACK 3: You have a few grammar mistakes
Overall, you did a great job I liked how you explained what taking ownership is!

Jayden

4/5/2022 06:33:51 pm

We know what ownership means but we need to look into a bit more. What does ownership actually mean? Ownership is about taking responsibility of yourself independently with using the big 6 learning principles and other reading strategies. Ownership tells me how to finish big projects and large homework. Ownership mostly tells me to finish my stuff before it's due independently, and you need to take teacher feedback to make it look better. I think that everybody should take ownership because it tells you how to be responsible of your homework independently, and feedback. We all have ownership.

Rhea

4/5/2022 07:06:31 pm

Learning intention. Success criteria. Descriptive feedback. All of these parts of the Big 6 Learning Principles lead to the ultimate goal of learning: Ownership. But what exactly is ownership? In simple terms, ownership is where you take responsibility of your learning; this can include taking action to maximize your, or others', full learning potential. For instance, if one is unsure if their work fulfills the criteria, they can do multiple things, such as checking the criteria and self-assessing their work, asking for feedback, or looking at others' work for comparison and improvement. This encourages the student to own their learning because they are taking further steps to support themselves in their learning journey. Ownership is all about doing something for your own sake, not others. In illustration, when asking for feedback, the student's goal should not be to show others that they are taking the next step, but to show themselves that they are learning more from it. Another example is writing a learning reflection. When writing a learning reflection, the student looks back at their learning and comes up with a list of what they did well and what they should improve. This prepares the student to do even better on the next project because they know what they did they should keep and what they didn't do and should add. What do you think ownership means to you?

Rhea

4/5/2022 07:10:24 pm

Self-assessment: I changed up a few wordings to enhance clarity.

Learning intention. Success criteria. Descriptive feedback. All these parts of the Big 6 Learning Principles lead to the goal of learning: Ownership. But what exactly is ownership? In simple terms, ownership is when you take responsibility of your learning; this can include maximizing your, or others', full learning potential. For instance, if one is unsure if their work fulfills the criteria, they can do multiple things, such as checking the criteria and self-assessing their work, asking for feedback, or looking at others' work for comparison and improvement. This encourages the student to own their learning because they are taking further steps to support themselves in their learning journey. In addition, ownership is all about doing something for your own sake, not others. In illustration, when asking for feedback, the student's goal should not be to show others that they are taking the next step, but to show themselves that they are gaining more knowledge from it. Finally, another example of owning your learning is writing a learning reflection. When writing a learning reflection, the student looks back at their learning and produces a list of what they did well and what they should improve. This prepares the student to do even better on the next project because they know what they did they should keep and what they did not do and should add. What do you think ownership means to you?

ASH

4/5/2022 07:17:03 pm

Have you heard what ownership is? Well, Ownership is when a learner is motivated, active, engaged, organized, and honest to learn. But do you know how to take ownership? No? Taking ownership of your learning could be a bunch of things For example, Mr. Hong: Ashleigh have you finished your math that I assigned yesterday? Ashleigh: No I was watching TV all night so I forgot to do my homework. Well, that can be one way but isn't that too honest? Some people in class decide to not take ownership there can be some consequences one of them could be Mr. Hong being disappointed with you or worse! In conclusion, ownership could sound like a small thing but if you think of it in another way is so much bigger!

I've met the criteria and all the requirements

ASH

4/5/2022 07:17:48 pm

SELF ASSESSMENT: grammar mistakes, and some errors

Rhea

4/5/2022 07:48:43 pm

@Ash Great job! I can tell you understand what ownership is!

FEEDBACK: Check the GIVENS; you have some careless capitals and missing punctuation. Overall, nice work!

ASH

4/5/2022 10:22:06 pm

@Rhea- Yes I realized that you can read the revised paragraph

Brendan

4/5/2022 07:18:10 pm

What does it mean to take ownership of your learning? Well, ownership is part of the Big 6 Learning Principles and plays a large role in your success at school. Taking ownership describes many actions students must do in order to be efficient learners. Firstly, asking questions for clarification and seeking support from others is one way someone can take ownership of their learning. To illustrate, if you find a unit or lesson in math challenging, don't be hesitant to ask for help from an adult. However, making your parents ask the teacher for you isn't the way to do it as you aren't directly owning up to your "stretches". Asking yourself will allow you to grasp concepts much more easily, especially when compared to staying quiet and continuing to struggle. Additionally, ownership is also present when a student finishes their assigned work on time. The novel approach booklet was a great example of how important ownership is. To elaborate, if someone didn't complete the work their group had assigned, then all of their learning would be held back. In conclusion, everyone probably takes ownership everyday without even knowing. Whether it's asking questions or completing work on time, ownership makes your ability to learn that much better.

Brendan

4/5/2022 07:28:01 pm

Self-Assessment: I can elaborate more on some of my points.

What is ownership and what does it mean to own your learning? Well, ownership is part of the Big 6 Learning Principles and plays an important role in your success at school. Taking ownership broadly describes actions and behaviour students must accomplish in order to be efficient learners. Firstly, asking questions for clarification and seeking support from others is one way someone can take ownership of their learning. To illustrate, if you find a unit or lesson in math challenging, don't be hesitant to ask for help from an adult. However, making your parents ask the teacher for you isn't the way to do it as you aren't directly owning up to your "stretches". Asking yourself will allow you to grasp concepts much more easily, especially when compared to staying quiet and continuing to struggle alone. Additionally, ownership is also present when a student finishes their assigned work on time. The novel approach booklet was a great example of how important ownership is. To elaborate, if someone didn't complete the work their group had assigned, then all of their learning would be held back. On the other hand, if everyone is responsible for their work, then the learning continues. In conclusion, everyone takes ownership of their work all the time without even knowing. Whether it's asking questions or completing assignments on time, ownership makes your ability to learn that much better.

REVISED

ASH (Revised)

4/5/2022 07:19:43 pm

Have you heard what ownership is? Well, Ownership is when a learner is motivated, active, engaged, organized, and honest to learn. But do you know how to take ownership? No? Taking ownership of your learning could be a bunch of things for example, Mr. Hong: Ashleigh, have you finished your math that I assigned yesterday? Ashleigh: No, I was watching TV all night, so I forgot to do my homework. Well, that can be one way but isn't that too honest? Some people in class decide to not take ownership there can be some consequences one of them could be Mr. Hong being disappointed with you or worse! In conclusion, ownership could sound like a small thing but if you think of it in another way is so much bigger!

I've met the criteria and all the requirements

Shawn (REVISED)

4/5/2022 08:12:54 pm

What's ownership? Ownership is taking responsibility for and looking back and reflecting on your work. It's the final stage of the big 6 learning principles. I have taken ownership for my work when Mr. Hong asked me if I did both pages of my homework and I said I only did 1.5 pages. That's what ownership is.

Kai

4/5/2022 08:30:55 pm

Ownership is when someone owns up to there mistakes. For example, if your mom asks if you have finished your homework but you haven't, and you say you did, that would be lying. by telling your mom that you didn't do your work would be that person owning up to there mistakes therefore, having ownership. Another example of ownership can be when you were doing something you shouldn't be doing like going onto discord in class, and not lying to the teacher. I haven't been so good at showing ownership at school so that's something I have to work on.

Kai

4/27/2022 09:27:50 am

Ownership is when someone owns up to there mistakes. For example, if your mom asks if you have finished your homework but you haven't, and you say you did, that would be lying. By telling your mom that you didn't do your work would be that person owning up to there mistakes therefore, having ownership. Another example of ownership can be when you were doing something you shouldn't be doing like going onto discord in class, and not lying to the teacher. I haven't been so good at showing ownership at school so that's something I have to work on.

Matthew

4/5/2022 08:52:49 pm

im really sorry mr hong i forgot my math in class but could i come in early to finish it? this is an example of taking ownership of my learning
when i accidently forgot my math i wanted to get it finished so i did by taking ownership of my learning. ownership can be in many different forms for example getting your work done that would be a big owner of your learning. Now you know what ownership is all about

Angela

4/5/2022 08:56:04 pm

What does it mean to take ownership? Taking ownership means taking responsibility of your self and your learning. For example mr.hong was doing a homework cheek and you did not do it and you said you finished that is not taking ownership of your self. But if you did do your work and did not lie you would be taking ownership of your self. That is what taking ownership means.

Crystal

4/5/2022 09:32:35 pm

@Angela - Good job!
FEEDBACK
1) Check the givens, especially punctuation.
"...taking responsibility of (yourself) and...",
"For example(,) (Mr. Hong) ... homework (check) ..."
2) Your third sentence includes many run-on phrases that can be separated into different sentences.
Overall, great work!

Angela

4/5/2022 09:38:13 pm

Revised
What does it mean to taking ownership? It means taking responsibility for your self and your learning. For example, Mr. Hong was doing a homework check and you did not do it, and you said you finished, that is not taking ownership of your self. But if you did do your work and did not lie, you would be taking ownership of your self. That is what taking ownership means

Angela

4/5/2022 09:42:19 pm

I forgot to add a period at the end.

What does it mean to take ownership? Taking ownership means taking responsibility for your self and your learning. For example, Mr. Hong was doing a homework check and you did not do it, and you said you finished, that is not taking ownership of your self. But if you did do your work and did not lie, you would be taking ownership of your self. That is what taking ownership means.

Crystal

4/5/2022 09:21:01 pm

"At the end of the day, we are accountable to ourselves - our success is a result of what we do." This is quote from Catherine Pulsifer. It emphasizes the importance of taking ownership of what we do and learn. Ownership is one of the biggest parts of the Big 6 Learning Principles, and can lead many people to success. Now, what is ownership? Well, by taking ownership of your learning means that you are responsible for yourself and your work. Firstly, if you can take ownership, it means that you are able to reflect on your work through feedback and improve in the future. To elaborate, you may have completed an assignment and already handed it in to the teacher. Once you receive your work after it has been marked, you see you have made some mistakes. By taking ownership of your learning, you would reflect on what you could have improved on and apply those to your next assignment. Another way to show ownership is being able to solve problems during conflicts. To illustrate, if you are not able to finish your work in time by the due date, by thinking of multiple ways to solve this problem would be taking ownership. For example, emailing the teacher, working extra hard, or asking for help can be a few methods in arriving at a solution. To conclude, taking ownership of your learning in school and be crucial in succeeding. By knowing how to lead your own work and taking responsibility of your own learning can be extremely beneficial for the future. How do you take ownership of your learning?

Crystal

4/5/2022 09:23:47 pm

Self-assessment: I should check the givens and improve sentence fluency.

Crystal

4/5/2022 09:26:34 pm

"At the end of the day, we are accountable to ourselves - our success is a result of what we do." This is quote from Catherine Pulsifer. It emphasizes the importance of taking ownership in what we learn. Ownership plays a huge role in the Big 6 Learning Principles, and can lead many people to success. Now, what is ownership? Well, by taking ownership of your learning means that you are responsible for yourself and your work. Firstly, if you can take ownership, it means that you are able to reflect on your work through feedback and improve in the future. To elaborate, you may have completed an assignment and already handed it in to the teacher. Once you receive your mark, you realize you have made some mistakes. By taking ownership of your learning, you would reflect on what you could have improved on and apply those to your next assignment. Another way to show ownership is being able to solve problems during conflicts. To illustrate, if you are not able to finish your work in time by the due date, by thinking of multiple ways to solve this problem would be taking ownership. For example, emailing the teacher, working extra hard, or asking for help can be a few methods in arriving at a solution. To conclude, taking ownership of your learning in school can be crucial in succeeding. By knowing how to lead yourself to success and taking responsibility of your own learning can be extremely beneficial for the future. How do you take ownership of your learning?

Caroline

4/5/2022 09:47:57 pm

Ownership is an important part of how we learn, and is part of the Big 6 Learning Principles. It is taking responsibility of your learning to learn and improve. Taking ownership of your learning benefits you and your learning more than anyone else. A way I own my learning is marking my math correctly and doing my corrections, and not just marking all of my answers right. If you mark all of your answers right, you aren’t really learning or being honest. Another way I take ownership of my learning is by asking questions for clarification if something is unclear. Not asking questions and sitting at your desk doing nothing because you are embarrassed won’t help you learn, and is also a waste of your time. To conclude, ownership is a crucial step to the learning process, and even though it might not seem like it, it benefits you more than anyone else.

Caroline

4/5/2022 09:48:52 pm

Self-assessment: Add more details

Caroline

4/5/2022 09:55:50 pm

Ownership is an important part of how we learn, and is part of the Big 6 Learning Principles. It is taking responsibility of your learning to learn and improve. It is actively taking the steps to help you learn, not someone taking it for you. Taking ownership of your learning benefits you and your learning more than anyone else. For example, a way I own my learning is marking my math correctly and doing my corrections, and not just marking all of my answers right even if some of them are wrong. If you mark all of your answers right, you aren’t really learning or being honest. Another way I take ownership of my learning is by asking questions for clarification if something is unclear. Not asking questions and sitting at your desk doing nothing because you are embarrassed won’t help you learn, and is also a waste of your time. It might also result in you having more homework, which doesn’t help at all. To conclude, ownership is a crucial step to the learning process, and even though it might not seem like it, it benefits you more than anyone else.

Dillon

4/5/2022 10:26:39 pm

Do your parents ever get angrly because you are not studying? Have your parents told you to take care of your own learning? Then, they are wishing that you can take ownership over your learning. You are probablly wondering what does that mean, well you will need to read this to be a good learner and make your parents happy. Thaking ownership baicly means taking responsibility for your own learning. Your parents should not push you or force you to learn, you should take care of it yourself. If you have unfinished homework you should always think about it. If dont have time then you should still try you best to finish it and sacrifice some of yuor play time. You should also be very clear about what you need to work on. you should put time into your learning and actually do things for yourself. Remember you are not learning for your parents nor you teachers. If your parents are making your feelings to learning negetive then you should controll your emotions andtalk to them, you should always be intrested in being better. If you are not taking ownership of your learning don't be depress you still have time to work on it. In the future you will appreciate your owner ship more than anything else!

Trevor

4/5/2022 10:27:51 pm

What does taking ownership of your learning means? Ownership is how to achieve success in your learning process. To gain ownership of your learning, you must follow the Big 6 learning priciples. Which stands for Learning Intention, Success Criteria, Questions, Self/Peer Feedback, Descriptive Feedback, and last but not least Ownership. You must be responsible of your learning and self-regulate from time to time. You will need to perform active listening to be focus and help you at your learning. To sum it up, Ownership is a very important part of your learning it helps to to get better grades and succeed in life.

Beth

5/2/2022 09:03:40 pm

FEEDBACK:
1. Check the givens.
2. Include two points on how you use ownership.

Melissa

4/5/2022 10:41:00 pm

What’s it like to take ownership? Taking ownership isn’t just all about taking action in responsibility, well, that’s half of it, but it means showing others what you are capable of, figuring things on your own, and learning from your wrong doings. That’s what taking ownership means.

Angela

4/6/2022 06:48:05 pm

@Melissa-good job
Feedback: add an example.

Mais

4/5/2022 11:55:34 pm

Taking ownership doesn't just about learning, but it's about taking responsibility of anything. Taking responsibility of your actions, words, and work is something important to learn throughout the school years. For example, during one of my math tests; I was really frustrated because I wasn't understanding the questions because we ONLY had 4 DAYS to study for the test and although It was 4 days, I barely had time to study and during the test, I took ownership and blamed myself for not studying hard enough. Another example would be during sports! During volleyball, I remember accidentally hitting a friend and I took responsibility and said sorry later on. Taking ownership has changed a few traits of mine and that has improved my learning and understanding at school.

maya

4/6/2022 07:46:44 am

Don’t you feel good when you are able to take part in your own learning? Ownership. Ownership is part of the big 6 principles of learning. During this school year I have been able to reach the “ownership” part of my learning. For example, if I am not able to finish my work on time I will email Mr Hong asking if it’s okay to get more time. What I just said is an example of taking ownership of your learning. Basically, what I just said means that if you aren’t able to finish something you can use your “ownership” by letting a teacher know that you weren’t able to finish it that day. Another example of when I use ownership in my learning is when I don’t study enough for something and I don’t get the mark I’m expecting. That’s because it was my fault for not studying so I’m not going to take my anger out on anybody for the mark I got, I am going to take ownership by telling myself I should study more before a test to get the mark I want to try and get. Generally speaking, taking ownership of your learning can be shown in many different ways. Taking a part on your learning doesn’t only just mean what I gave examples for, but it ownership generally just means organization, taking part in your own learning, and being motivated and engaged to reach the success of ownership. So, in conclusion, taking part of your learning feels very good.

Bebe

4/6/2022 07:26:24 pm

Taking ownership basically just means to take responsibility of your work. When you don't do it on time that isn't taking ownership. To take ownership also means that you can't lie about weather you did it or not. For example, a while ago I told Mr. Hong that I brought home my Beijing grid art thingy but I actually forgot to bring it home that day. That isn't taking ownership so on that night I took it home and worked until very late. Another thing that isn't taking ownership is lying about doing it at all. I had a friend back at my old school that always don't do the work on time and always make up one excuse, "I left it at home". That isn't very good which means that he procrastinates a lot. That is what taking ownership means.

ASH

4/6/2022 07:42:27 pm

PAR POLICE

=MY TABLE=

Me: Complete
Rachel: Incomplete
Rhea: Complete
Sam: Give peer-feedback

If you are incomplete please do your PAR (Rachel and Sam please complete your PAR)

Rhea

4/11/2022 05:23:05 pm

PAR POLICE:
Me: Complete
Sam: Missing peer-feedback
Shawn: Missing peer feedback
Bebe: Missing revised version and peer feedback
Jayden: Missing revised version and peer feedback

Beth

5/2/2022 09:01:37 pm

Learning intentions, success criteria, self/peer assessments, descriptive feedback, and questions. These are only five of the Big 6 Learning Principles. You may be wondering what the sixth one is. I might as well save you some time, and explain it. Ownership. Taking ownership of your learning plays a tremendous part in your learning growth and mindset. To break it down, ownership is when you take control of your own learning, and decide what you need to improve, how you will improve, and understand how you got from point A to point B. You should know what can help you improve, and not be afraid to do it. For instance, asking questions, or checking the criteria several times to make sure you met it. Personally, I do both of these things. Or, when I feel that I can improve, but don't know exactly how, I ask my brother for feedback, as I know he will be honest and blunt (but not rude). Ownership is a skill that you will need throughout your entire life, whether it's school, a job, or even taking care of a child. Never be afraid to improve.

Beth

5/2/2022 09:08:23 pm

SELF-ASSESSMENT: Find a better clincher to sum up the paragraph and leave the reader thinking.

Beth (REVISED)

5/2/2022 09:17:47 pm

Learning intentions, success criteria, self/peer assessments, descriptive feedback, and questions. These are only five of the Big 6 Learning Principles. But, what is the sixth? Well, I might as well save you some time, and explain it. This mysterious sixth learning principle is ownership. Essentially, ownership is taking control over your learning, and deciding what you need to improve, how you will improve, and understanding how you got from Point A to Point B. On top of that, don't feel afraid to ask for help. Personally, I ask questions about an assignment plenty of times. Moreover, I often check the criteria several times to make sure I have met it. Or, when I feel that I still have room for improvement, but am not sure where, I ask a friend for feedback. If you think about it, ownership is a skill that you will need throughout your entire life, whether it's school, managing a job, or even taking care of someone. When you look back, and feel like you did your best, you'll know how you did it, and you'll be proud.

Beth

5/2/2022 09:21:31 pm

I completed my self-assessment and revised paragraph.
I changed my wordings a little bit as I felt my paragraph could have more fluency, and I improved my clincher.

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8/9/2022 12:52:00 pm

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