SOAR ASSEMBLY

10/27/2022

Click above for the national anthem.

Today, Mr. T co-created an action criteria with the students for self-regulating during assemblies. Prior to heading down for our first school-wide assembly, the students reviewed the new c-chart! It was amazing how self-regulated the students were on their way to the gym, during the assembly, and on the way back. Mr. T did a great job setting the expectations for the students. For the first time in a very long time, we sang the national anthem before the assembly started. Later, students continued reviewing for the unit math test tomorrow. The slideshow Mr. T created is linked below. In the afternoon, we learned French and did some preparations for the student/parent/teacher conferences that will happen next week.

IMPORTANT:
1.) MATH: Unit test tomorrow!

LEARNING PLANNER:
1.) READING: 30 minutes

2.) MATH: Complete all review questions posted yesterday.

| Chapter 1 Self-test | Chapter 1 Chapter review | Pg. 29 #6 and #9 | Pg 33 #3 |
Check with the answer key at the back of your textbook.

3.) SCIENCE: Body systems - You should have at least 3 total different body systems completed for tomorrow on your graphic organizers.

4.) POST A RESPONSE:

LEARNING INTENTION: I can explain step-by-step (using transition words like first, second, third, etc) how to complete my daily PAR.
SUCCESS CRITERIA:
1.) PARAGRAPH FORMAT: intro/body/ conclusion.
2.) GIVENS: Pay close attention to your spelling, capitals, punctuation, grammar, sentence structure, etc.
3.) INTRO: Make it as exciting and engaging as possible.
4.) BODY: Step-by-step, explain the steps to setting using proper technique.
5.) CONCLUSION: Tie up your paragraph smoothly.
6.) PEER FEEDBACK/SELF-ASSESSMENT: Give 1 student 2 things to improve on based on the above criteria.
7.) REVISED VERSION: Based on the feedback you receive or the self-assessment you complete, post a revised version as a reply to your original post.

VIDEO LINKS:
Oh Canada

Wesley

10/27/2022 03:26:24 pm

1st

Wesley

10/27/2022 03:26:45 pm

I thought it was only one body system

Owen

10/27/2022 03:54:38 pm

2nd dang it

Owen

10/27/2022 04:31:34 pm

Do you know what a PAR is? Well, I am going to explain to you how to complete your daily PAR! If you didn't know PAR is a short form of paragraph!
First, Mr. Hong will give us an idea then we will use that idea to write something about it. For me it takes me around 3 minutes to think of a way that I can write it in. Don't forget to put your name in the "name box"
After you thought of the way that you can write the idea in, make the way you thought of happen. That means to use the way you thought of and write about the idea Mr. Hong gives us. You should write until you are out of ideas. Don't be lazy because this WILL guide you to become a better writer.
Now for the easiest part, post your writing to the website! This way Mr. Hong will know that you did the PAR!

Aaron

10/27/2022 08:07:02 pm

@Owen par stands for post a response not paragraph and weres the stuff about revisions? good job other than that :)

Aishi

10/27/2022 08:24:17 pm

@Owen, You didn't really explain how to do your daily PAR. You only talked about what is PAR and PAR stands with Post A Response. I also think there is a tiny grammar mistake, you said post to website, I think it should be post on website. Otherwise, it was really good. 😁

Zakariya

10/27/2022 04:48:00 pm

@Mr Hong What will be on the test tomorrow?

leah

10/27/2022 05:20:47 pm

@Zakariya, there will be GCF, LCM, and divisibility rules, 2-11

Zakariya

10/27/2022 05:22:22 pm

@leah alr thanks

Mr. T

10/27/2022 07:21:02 pm

@leah and @Zakariya - don't forget prime factorization!

Aishi

10/27/2022 08:25:25 pm

ALSO PRIME FACTORIZATION !!!!!

Mr. Hong

10/28/2022 09:36:33 am

@ Zak - Everything covered in the review and all the learning intentions given to you in class.

Wesleu

10/27/2022 04:51:03 pm

Can someone tell me if we have to do 3 body systems or 1

Owen

10/27/2022 04:55:09 pm

He says to complete at least 3 body systems so that means 1 from before one from yesterday and one from today

Mr. Hong

10/28/2022 09:36:51 am

@ Owen - Good reading! :)

Owen

10/27/2022 04:56:38 pm

@Mr.Hong I didn't bring my binder home because I don't think Mr. T put that in the planner messages

leah

10/27/2022 05:16:40 pm

3rd

leah

10/27/2022 05:21:52 pm

the par can be anything right

Owen

10/27/2022 05:32:19 pm

No, you have to explain how to complete the daily PAR

leah

10/27/2022 05:33:55 pm

oh oops

Aaron

10/27/2022 05:18:08 pm

no leah your are 4th

leah

10/27/2022 05:21:36 pm

but no one said 3rd so ya

leah

10/27/2022 05:33:28 pm

There's something unique about our class. One thing is the BIG 6 learning principles.

First of all, the BIG 6 learning principles is our special way of learning. One of them is learning intentions. Learning intentions are the purpose of the learning activity.

Second is success criteria. Success criteria lists all the expectations of the project.

Third, are questions. Don't be afraid to ask questions, or else, you can't get the job done.

Fourth, is peer/self assessment. Assessing work means you make sure you or a peer has followed the success criteria. Think of it like double checking.

Fifth, is descriptive feedback. It's important to give good feedback that helps improve your peer's work.

Finally, OWNERSHIP. Ownership is our destination of learning. It means taking charge of YOUR learning and having integrity and OWNING IT.

These are the BIG 6 learning principles. Use it, because in my opinion, it's the best way of learning. ALL ABOUT THE LEARNING.

leah

10/27/2022 05:34:50 pm

sorry forget about that⬆️

leah

10/27/2022 05:45:39 pm

[REVISED]

Our par is something you should do daily in this class. However, sometimes there won't be a par which is what we call, a par holiday.

First of all, par stands for Post A Response. It is something on the class website that you should do for homework.

When you first access the website, read the part that tells us about the day and homework. Know why? It will tell us about what we learned today. It will come in handy if you were away.

Next, when you see the part that says 'Post a Response', read the success criteria and get to work. Once you're done, respond to other's post and give them descriptive feedback to help them improve. You will probably get some too, so then you can improve as well. Although, once in a while, you won't get any feedback. Well what do I do now? You can give your self feedback which is called a SELF ASSESSMENT.

Hopefully, you can learn from what I said and use that in your next post.

Owen

10/27/2022 05:37:47 pm

@leah we have to explain on how to do PAR

leah

10/27/2022 05:46:44 pm

I know that now, sorry ;(

Leah

10/27/2022 06:04:33 pm

@Mr. Hong, do u mind deleting that for me please?

Aishi

10/27/2022 08:26:30 pm

I honestly think we should keep it. Everyone makes mistakes.

Leah

10/27/2022 08:50:55 pm

. . .

Really? U really wanna keep it 😳

Mr. Hong

10/28/2022 09:37:50 am

@ Leah - Don't worry! I agree with Aishi! :)

Mr. Hong

10/28/2022 09:37:24 am

@ Leah - Amazing!

Esther

10/27/2022 06:06:43 pm

PAR. What is it exactly? PAR stands for post a response. It's assigned usually around 4 times a week for homework. You should be completing it everyday, to boost your learning and writing skills.
Don't know how to do it? Well, I'll explain.

First, visit the class website often. I'd say 2-3 times a day. In case you somehow don't know what website you're reading this on, is www.mrhongsclass.com. Check once in the afternoon, once after dinner, and maybe once in the night. It should show up before 7pm though, If not, it's a PAR holiday.

Second, make sure to READ the instructions and important information on the class website. Watch the video if it's necessary for the PAR. Now read the PAR success criteria. It should say what you need to include in your paragraph.

Now you need to actually start on the PAR. Start off with an interesting hook. I like to use questions often as my hooks.
After that is done, move onto your body. Your body should have 2-3 points with supporting sentences. Not just a few words. The instructions make it sound short, but you really need to extend it. Don't just write something like "I love PAR. Par is good because it is fun. PAR is good because it improves your learning. PAR is good because you get feedback." You should explain WHY it helps your learning, why feedback is good, etc. Once you're done your body, move onto the conclusion. Make this as fun as possible, and just end off the paragraph smoothly.

Submitted your paragraph? Don't leave just yet. This is called post a RESPONSE. You should give feedback to other students, and once you receive feedback, revise your PAR. If nobody gives you feedback, do a self-assessment! What do you think you should add to your PAR to make it even better?

If you're still confused on how to do PAR, just look at all the other comments here! I'm sure you'll get it after practicing a lot. Not everyone is perfect at the beginning.

Owen

10/27/2022 09:17:19 pm

How do you write so much?

Esther

10/27/2022 10:56:27 pm

Tbh I don't know just type fast ig??

Mr. Hong

10/28/2022 09:38:25 am

@ Esther - Good effort!

wesley

10/27/2022 07:17:34 pm

My par restarted again

Wesley

10/27/2022 07:24:38 pm

What is PAR? PAR stand for post a response. To make a good PAR all you need to do is follow the success criteria. First write your name and start typing. Secondly have a interesting intro and use exciting words. Third, write you body and make it organized. Then, write your conclusion. After that read your PAR to check for mistakes. Finally post you PAR. That’s it, that is how you do PAR.

Mr. T

10/27/2022 07:54:18 pm

@Wesley I really like your use of transition words - nice work! Think about how you can make your hook more engaging.

Aishi

10/27/2022 08:28:53 pm

@Wesley, it was really good, but PAR also includes feedback and revising (i think).

Aaron

10/27/2022 07:27:18 pm

Do you know how to write a par? Do you even know what the word par is? Well let's start with what par means. Par means post a response. How we post our par is we go online onto our class website. Then we look at what the prompt is. Then we go and write a paragraph and post it. After that you go and get it revised by your classmates or a family member. Then you go rewrite your paragraph. You are also asked to give some feedback to fellow classmates. The paragraph format is intro/hook, body/ supporting response and lastly a conclusion. How I usually write my par is I write the body then conclusion and go back to the top to write the hook that way I feel I can connect the hook with my writing. After all of that is done, I ask my had or my brother or my dad to help me find stuff to fix. After I do my revisitation. Do you think the way I do par is good? Or do you think your way of doing par is better? Please write about how you do your par I can’t wait to get more tips.

Aaron (Revised)

10/27/2022 07:36:27 pm

Do you know how to write a par? Do you even know what the word par is? Well let's start with what par means. Par means post a response. How we post our par is we go online onto our class website. Then, we look at what the prompt is. After that, we go and write a paragraph and post it. After that, you go and get feedback from your classmates or a family member. Then, you go rewrite your paragraph. You are also asked to give some feedback to fellow classmates. The paragraph format is intro/hook, body/supporting response, and lastly a conclusion. How I usually write my par is I write the body then conclusion and go back to the top to write the hook that way I feel I can connect the hook with my writing. After all of that is done, I ask my brother or my dad to help me find stuff to fix. After, I do my revisions. Do you think the way I do par is good? Or do you think your way of doing par is better? Please write about how you do your par I can’t wait to get more tips.

Micah

10/27/2022 07:46:30 pm

have you ever heard of PAR before? It stands for Post and Respond what you do is to read and follow the learning intentions your teacher posts, and write a paragraph about it. First thing you do after you finish writing is to read other people's PAR adn give them peer feedback. then you wait and until someone give feedback to you so you are probably wondering what if nobody give you feedback? Simple, you just ask your parents or do a self-assessment which is to reread your paragraph and give yourself some feedbacks to improve. Lastly, of course you can't just post random thing and don't even talk about inappropriate comments. Congrats, you have learned a new skill, I wish it can come useful someday.

Micah

10/27/2022 07:51:28 pm

@Aaron fantastic paragraph, just a small capital mistake, but every thing else is great.

Micah

10/27/2022 07:54:00 pm

whoops wrong reply I meant the one Aaron had before he revised just the PAR has to be capitalized.

Micah(Revised)

10/27/2022 08:00:45 pm

Have you ever heard of PAR before? It stands for Post and Respond, what you do is to read and follow the learning intentions your teacher posts and write a paragraph about it. First thing you do after you finish writing, is to read other people's PAR and give them some peer feedbacks. Then, you wait and until someone give feedback to you. So you are probably wondering, what if nobody give you feedback? Simple, you just ask your parents or do a self-assessment which is to reread your paragraph and give yourself some feedbacks to improve. Lastly, of course you can't just post random thing and don't even talk about inappropriate comments. Congrats, you have learned a new skill, it might be a little difficult and easy to forget at first, eventually you would improve more and more. That was what a PAR should l look like and I wish it can come useful someday for you!

Elton

10/27/2022 09:13:45 pm

@Micah
Just for the record, PAR stands for Post A Response.

Mr. T

10/27/2022 08:03:58 pm

@Micah I like your writing style and how you made it seem like you were talking right to me. Pay attention to to grammar and sentence structure, especially in the first few and last few sentences.

Esther

10/27/2022 10:59:28 pm

Nice PAR, but I'm pretty sure it stands for post a response not post and response, and maybe capitalize the H. Good job though

Esther

10/27/2022 11:00:54 pm

Oops sorry didn't see the revised version before I posted the feedback. Nice PAR though

Shine

10/27/2022 08:13:50 pm

"It's time for dinner!"
"Just wait a minute I have to finish my PAR."

The first thing I do it check the website and read the PAR learning intention. Second, I carefully check the success criteria. Third, I open a word document and complete the PAR. The reason I do this is because sometimes I have lost my work on the website page and this makes me so mad. When I have completed the writing I check my work and the success criteria to make sure I have done it all right. Last, I copy and paste it into the website. And........BAM! It's all done.

Charley

10/27/2022 10:47:00 pm

@Shine, I really liked your paragraph, especially the BAM! at the end! A suggestion, maybe you could switch up your intro a bit, as I feel like having dinner and PAR is a bit irrelevant. But that said, the rest of your PAR was great!

Aishi

10/27/2022 08:17:48 pm

Here are some instructions on how to do the daily PAR. Firstly, you should read the daily blurb, then you should read the instructions and the learning intention. Then you coud write a paragragh that followa that learning intention. Your paragragh doesn't need to be perfect, you could wait for feedback to make it better. Afterwards, you could give descriptive feddback. After an hour or so, you could check if anyone had gaiven you feedback. If no one had given you any feedback, you could write a self-assessment. I hope you learned something from me. Good luck on your PAR.

Aishi (REVISED)

10/27/2022 08:20:26 pm

Here are some instructions on how to do the daily PAR. Firstly, you should read the daily blurb, then you should read the instructions and the learning intention. Then you could write a paragraph that follows the learning intention. Your paragraph doesn't need to be perfect, you could wait for feedback to make it better. Afterwards, you could give descriptive feedback. After an hour or so, you could check if anyone had given you feedback. If no one had given you any feedback, you could write a self-assessment. I hope you learned something from me. Good luck on your PAR!

Gavin:)

10/27/2022 08:24:50 pm

Do you know how to do your PAR? Today I will teach you how to do it.

PAR stands for post a response.

First Mr. Hong will give the instructions for what to write. Second you write a hook. Second you write a topic sentence. Next you write the supporting sentences. Lastly you write a conclusion. After you edit to see if there are any mistakes then submit it.

After you submit check for any feedback. After you get feedback you write a revised paragraph. You could also give feedback to other classmates.

This is how you do PAR and what to do after you post.

Elton

10/27/2022 09:17:24 pm

@Gavin
First, you wrote second twice,
Second, it sound a bit repetitive.

Gavin

10/28/2022 11:25:47 am

kaley

10/28/2022 02:10:43 pm

@gavin maybe make a smoother conclusion

Kaley

10/27/2022 08:42:00 pm

“What’s a par?” This is what my family always ask when I say I forgot to do it. If you’re not in mr hongs or mr fishers class you probably don’t know what a PAR is so I’ll be explaining what our daily par is.
PAR stands for”post a response”. Normally, almost everyday before 7:00pm Mr hong will update the class website and give us something to write a paragraph/par about.
Then once us students see that mr hong has giving us a PAR then we’ll go to the comments and write about.
Once we have posted it let a classmate, teacher or yourself assess what you’ve just written (self/peer assessment) then take that feedback and make a revised version.
You should be doing the par every time it needs to be done or you probably won’t get the best evaluation on this and maybe your parents might be contacted. So make sure to do you park and follow criteria!

Kaley (SELF-ASSESSMENT)

10/28/2022 11:30:44 am

Check for GIVENS

Kaley (REVISED)

10/28/2022 11:41:28 am

“Uhhhmmm…What’s a PAR Kaley?
This is something my parents or grandparents always ask when I mention it. It’s understandable however since they’re not in Mr. Fisher or Mr. Hongs class.
If you don’t know what a PAR is read some more to understand as I will be explaining what a PAR is and how to do it!
PAR stands for post a response, normally Mr. Hong would update the class website and give us something to write a PAR about and give us some criteria. If we don’t have a PAR by 7pm then we probably don’t have a PAR that day.
Once we have posted our PAR then we can give feedback to either yourself or a peer/classmate. If someone gives you feedback whether it’s a teacher, classmate or yourself then you can make a revised version with that feedback in mind.
Try to complete PAR every time it’s gets updated but things do come up so if that happens feel free to do it the next day or on a PAR holiday. If you don’t complete the PAR daily then parents might be contacted 👀.
Make sure to complete all the steps of the daily PAR (1st draft,feedback and revised ver.) so parents aren’t contacted 😅

Archer

10/27/2022 08:50:16 pm

Par helps you with your writing skills! But how exactly do you do par?

For starters, par stands for post a response. Mr. Hong will post a topic on his website that we have to write a paragraph about. But before you type anything you have to read the daily blurb to see if there are any important things going on.

Type out your paragraph and read over your paragraph. Get feedback from classmates or family members so you can revise your work! Make sure to use triple scoop words when writing your paragraph!

Zakariya

10/27/2022 09:02:45 pm

P.A.R. What does that stand for? P.A.R stands for Post A Response, which is like a paragraph we have to do everyday. So I will explain what is PAR and how to do it.

PAR is kind of like homework our class does daily. PAR helps us with paragraph writing as we have to write paragraphs based on a topic Mr. Hong gives us. PAR has helped me improve my writing by a lot and the term hasn't even finished.

Ok, I'm talking a lot about PAR, so how do you do it? First step is to go onto mrhongsclass.com and read the daily blurb. You can also check the learning planner for any missed homework or links. Next, you check the learning intention and form some ideas for your paragraph. This may take up some time, but that's ok as that means you are really thinking as this is an important part of your PAR. Once you have formed some ideas, write them down as your draft paragraph. Personally I like to write my Draft on paper because I am better at spilling my thoughts onto paper rather than a keyboard. After you have completed your draft, you self-assess yourself or take feedback and create a revised version of your PAR. There are several key components to an extending PAR. Your PAR should have the 6 writing traits incorporated into it; Idea, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, and Conventions. These are the foundations of a paragraph, further explaining why it's important if you want extending.

Congratulations! After thoroughly following these very simple steps I have set out for you, You have completed your daily PAR just like that! Now you have to do that for the next 8 months! ENJOY!

Elton

10/27/2022 09:14:38 pm

do you know what par is? if you dont know youre gonna be in big trouble. almost every day mr hong posts a par everyday. par is short for post a response. in the par there will be a learning intention, anbd successs criteria. next you go to the comments and you write your par, following the sucess criteria. then after you post you give anothre person discreptive feedback. after you do that you can either use feed back that someone gave you are give yourself a self assesment. if you finish all that then you are done.

Elton(revised)

10/27/2022 09:27:54 pm

feedback: . . .WRITE BETTER
Do you know how to write a PAR? Do you even know what a "PAR" even is? Well, I do, and I am very experienced in doing PAR's and the whole process, so I will explain to you. First of all, if you don't even know what a PAR is, you are going to be in big trouble. Almost every day Mr. Hong posts a blog about what we learned in class today. Within the post lies the PAR. PAR is short for post a response. In the par there will be a learning intention, and success criteria so you know what you have to do. Next, you go to the comments and you write your PAR, following the success criteria so you know you are doing the right thing. After you post you give another person descriptive feedback so they can improve your work. After you do that, you can either use feedback that someone gave you are give yourself a self assessment. After you get your feed back, either from another classmate or from your family, you re write your PAR so that it gets even better than it already is. If you finish all that then you are done your PAR.

Sohil

10/27/2022 09:15:27 pm

Do you know what P.A.R. Is? No, that's ok I'll tell you about it.

P.A.R. Stands for Post And Response. P.A.R. Is where you go to our class website(www.mrhongsclass.com) and check the most recent post, you look at it watch the video and pay lots of attention, then you will scroll to the bottom of the page and write your name, then you write a paragraph about the video you just watched, after that you submit it and wait in probably an hour you should go to the website and look for feedback and use it. Thats how you do P.A.R.ツ.

Elton

10/27/2022 09:28:32 pm

@Sohil
Why so much blank space?

Himavanth

10/27/2022 10:02:34 pm

Something that is kind of important to learning in this class is PAR. PAR is very important, and you must be following the success criteria for it.

Firstly, you must use lots of transition, such as firstly, finally, etc.. This is because without it the PAR will sound much more like notes.

Secondly, you must follow the success criteria. No matter how bad your PAR is, if it follows the success criteria, you will get an extending. In this class, we believe ANYONE can achieve extending and success.

Finally, you must be posting respectfully, because whatever you post on the internet, stays on the internet, and by the time you want to erase it, someone could have already took a screenshot of it.

So in the end, why are PARs important? It is because it effects your evaluation in writing.

Diego

10/27/2022 10:15:22 pm

Par
Par is a paragraph but online. To do a par you need paragraph formats, intro, body,and pay close attention to capitals dots commas ect. Is very simple you just need to look at the instructions then do a paragraph send it and based on your feedback that they give you do a new paragraph on what they said to you is really simple. If you have a connection on the par you can write it to.

Charley

10/27/2022 10:22:07 pm

@Mr. Hong, I can't seem to find the slideshow Mr. T created...

Charley

10/27/2022 10:44:10 pm

Imagine if you could do your homework ahead of time! That would be amazing. Although you can't do a PAR ahead of time, you can expect a PAR basically every day! PAR stands for post a response. It is around a paragraph of writing we do almost everyday to help practise our writing.

Normally for me, I check the class website at around 5 pm. Usually by then, Mr. Hong would have posted a new update. If I don't see a new update by 7pm, it's a PAR holiday!

When I receive the new update, I read the whole post to make sure I know the instructions and important things like homework for the day. Then, I would watch the video Mr. Hong attaches.
After that, I would start writing my PAR! I always try to start off with an attention-grabbing hook. Something like, "Ka-boom!" or "Imagine if..." After that, I write my main content of the paragraph, composed of supporting sentences. Also, I try to make my point clear. This is important so the reader won't be confused. So, instead of, "Today I went fishing, I caught a salmon. Funny name right? Yellow is my favourite colour", which is complete jumping to different topics, I write "There are many fish in the whole world. Salmon is just one of them." Once I'm done my body, I try to create a conclusion that wraps everything up clear and smooth.

After that, I would double check for any grammar mistakes, and when I'm happy with it, I post it.

Then, I give feedback to other students to help with their and my learning. Around an hour later, I would check the class website again to see if anyone gave me comments, and I would revise my PAR according to their suggestions. That way, I would always keep learning from my classmates!

Carina =)

10/28/2022 07:53:58 am

Do you know how to write a PAR? First of all, PAR stands for "Post A Response." When you get to the website, read everything on the daily post and do the assigned homework. After you've done that, carefully read through the PAR instructions that Mr. Hong put. Make sure to include a good hook for the intro, a few sentences for the body, and conclusion that sums everything up nicely. Now that you've written your paragraph, check everything over to make sure your grammer is correct. Done with that? Time to post it on to the website. Now wait for someone to give some feedback to your paragraph, if there isn't any feedback you can always just by sending a comment or ask your parents/siblings etc. You should also give feedback to someone else! Then, revise your paragraph with the feedback you recieved and send it as a reply to your original message. Yay! You just finished the PAR!

(I forgot to send it yesterday)

Kibb

10/28/2022 08:36:25 am

What is a par exactly? Well, a par is basically a daily paragraph that you have to use your own writing skills to publish on a website. There will be a randomly set topic that you’ve learnt from your lessons today, you will have to follow the instructions that Mr Hong put.

You must write an intro, body and conclusion. Then, you have to check on your writing and see if there are any grammar mistakes. Then, you can give feedback to other people!

sophie

10/28/2022 02:52:28 pm

Do you know how to write a par? Do you even understand what PAR means? for those who don't know, Par stands for post a response. PAR. First we get online, then, we look at what the main idea is. After that, we go and write a paragraph about it and post it. After we post the paragraph, you go and get feedback from your classmates or if you can't find anyone, you give yourself feed back. Then, you go rewrite your paragraph.

Kaila

10/28/2022 10:01:32 pm

@-Sophie maybe make you paragraph more detailed.

Emily link

10/29/2022 02:31:25 pm

Do you know how to complete your daily PAR? PAR stands for Post A Response. It is a writing assignment that we have to complete every day by posting a comment on the class website, usually related to what we learned that day in class.

To complete your daily PAR, start by looking at the learning intention and success criteria. This will give you an idea of what to write about. Make sure to use proper paragraph format (intro, body, conclusion) and pay attention to the givens! Try to make your intro as exciting as possible. Also, make sure to include 2-3 supporting points in the body of your paragraph. Lastly, add a conclusion that briefly summarizes everything you just wrote about.

Once you've posted your comment, read one other student's paragraph and give them two things to improve on based on the success criteria by replying to their comment. Check the website frequently to see if you've received any feedback. If you have, reply to your original comment and try to improve your paragraph using the feedback you were given. If you haven't, do a quick self-assessment using the success criteria and try to give yourself two things to improve on.

PAR seems complicated, but it's easy once you get the hang of it! Just make sure to always follow the success criteria!

Aiden

10/30/2022 12:53:59 pm

What is PAR? PAR stands for post a response. To do it you must follow the learning intention. You must also add a engaging hook to get the reader interested and a body and an conclusion to rap it up. And that’s how you do PAR.

Marius

10/31/2022 07:47:45 pm

@ Aiden maybe next time u should write a little bit more but otherwise it’s really good 👍

Kaila

10/30/2022 01:00:07 pm

Do you know how to do a PAR? a Par stands for post a response and is a paragraph we have to post daily on the class website usally related to what we learned in school that day.

First around around 6-7 pm you go on to www.hrhongsclass.com and read the daily blurb next you look at the learning intention and success criteria of the par you will have to complete. then you forman idea of what your paragraph will be about using parapraph format (intro,body,conclusions,) an exgaging hook 2-3 suporting setences and lastly a conclusion that ties everything toghether. once you finished your paragraph and post it and wait to get peer feedback. if you never recive any you can always do a self assesment based on the success criteria to see if their is anything you cam improve the last step is to read one of your classmates par and give them 1-2 things you think they could improve one.

now you know how to do a daily par and won't ever be unsure!

Kaila(Revised)

10/30/2022 01:10:56 pm

Do you know how to do a PAR? a Par stands for post a response and is a paragraph we have to post daily on the class website related to what we learned in school that day.

First round around 6-7 pm you will go on to www.hrhongsclass.com and read the daily blurb. Next, you look at the learning intention and success criteria of the PAR. Then you brainstorm an idea of what your paragraph will be about using paragraph format (intro, body, conclusions,) an engaging hook, 2-3 supporting sentences, and lastly a conclusion that ties everything together. Once you finished your paragraph and post it you read one of your classmate's PAR and give the 1-2 things you think they could improve on. Finally, you wait and see if you got any feedback on your PAR but If you never receive any peer feedback you can always do a self-assessment based on the success criteria to see if there is anything you can improve your work.

Now you know how to do a daily par and won't ever be unsure of what you are supposed to do!

Marius

10/31/2022 07:59:24 pm

Do you know what P.A.R stands for? Well I’ll tell you. It stands for post a response which we have it daily, but sometimes we have a holiday.

First you go to the class web. Then there will be a little section saying what we learned in class that day. Next we read the success criteria for our P.A.R which is based on what we learned in class. After that we have to start writing it. How? You may ask, well first you need an engaging hook to attract your readers attention second we need to put at least 3 supporting sentences lastly you need your conclusion to tie things up together.

Once you are finished with your P.A.R you have to give feedback to a few of your classmates. At last you can do your revised version of your written P.A.R. I’ll try to tell you how to do that. The first step is to take feedback from your classmates and like add it to your P.A.R. If nobody gives you feedback you can do a self assessment.

Now you know what P.A.R. Is and you can do it right? ...

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