After School Routines

11/16/2016

Kid President

Yesterday, the students learned about morning routines. We learned that we all do things a little bit differently, but more or less, there are certain things we all have to do in the morning to get ready for the day. Today, the students discussed after school routines with Mr. Redican. Setting time aside for homework, the post a response, dinner with your family, and getting ready for bed is an important part of your day. You need down time just as much as you need time to brush your teeth.

1.) POST A RESPONSE:

In paragraph form, list out your afters school and bedtime routine.
You must include at least 3 transition words. Try to use SEQUENCING transition words that are listed here.
IMPORTANT: Be sure to pay attention to your spelling, capitals, grammar, and sentence structure. This are things that should be obvious when doing any writing activity.
Give one other student some feedback on their post. This should be specific to their spelling, capitals, grammar, or sentence structure. Tell them a specific word they should fix instead of saying, "You had a spelling error."
Edit/revise your original post after reviewing your feedback or doing a self-assessment and proofreading it yourself.

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Elenoa

11/16/2016 06:51:35 pm

First!!

Tyler

11/16/2016 08:03:42 pm

I think you should post your post.

Shmil

11/16/2016 06:52:17 pm

SECOND~!

Elenoa

11/16/2016 06:52:24 pm

@ MR.Hong - I posted for yesterdays post. i think you should read it.

Mr. Hong

11/16/2016 07:08:59 pm

@ Elenoa - I'll read it shortly! Thanks for letting me know!

Jagger

11/16/2016 06:56:41 pm

Third 3

Jagger

11/16/2016 07:03:28 pm

What I do after school I go home and I check the website to see if mr.hong posted anything on the website when I'm done doing that I go and eat my dinner after that I play video games then I check the website to see if anyone else posted.
Then I go that a shower the I brush my teeth I lay out the clothes for tomorrow so I can get ready faster I go to bed at 9:00.

That's what I do afters school.

Logan

11/16/2016 07:18:19 pm

@Jagger you should put some commas,and periods after the next thing.☺

Logan

11/16/2016 07:19:09 pm

But good job on your post👍

Jagger

11/16/2016 07:45:20 pm

Thanks logan

Logan

11/16/2016 07:17:01 pm

First: I check the website.Second: I go to the washroom. Third:I bottle flip. Fourth: Eat. Fith: Clean my house. Sixth: I do math worksheets that my dad prints out. Seventh: Eat dinner. Eighth: Play video games. Ninth I check website to give feedback. Tenth: Shower. Eleventh: Brush teeth and wash my face. Twelfth: Go to bed at night.

I go to bed at 9:00

Shmil

11/16/2016 08:51:07 pm

You didn't put a space between third and the letter i. But you did a good job. \( ✧ ω ✧ )/

Chance

11/16/2016 09:10:46 pm

No really I thought you go to bed at 9:00 in the morning lol. Also you spelled fifth wrong

Logan

11/16/2016 09:46:57 pm

Revised:First: I check the website.Second: I go to the washroom. Third: I bottle flip. Fourth: Eat. Fifth: Clean my house. Sixth: I do math worksheets that my dad prints out. Seventh: Eat dinner. Eighth: Play video games. Ninth I check website to give feedback. Tenth: Shower. Eleventh: Brush teeth and wash my face. Twelfth: Go to bed at night.

Jaci

11/16/2016 07:20:06 pm

What I basically do after school is my mom takes me and my sisters out to eat food after we come home the first thing I do is check the website after that my mom tells me if I can take food out for my dog.after that I go on my iPad when it's like 7:00 I watch the tv but at 9:00 i check the website again if it's there I write what I have to write then I go to my room to sleep it's nothing interesting what I do lol.

Jesse

11/16/2016 07:27:20 pm

@JacI
Capitalize your (A) in after.

Jaci

11/16/2016 08:17:26 pm

Thanks

Jesse

11/16/2016 07:24:57 pm

When I come home I check website, then, I prepare dinner, after that I take a shower. I check the website , then eat. After, dinner I go with my dad to pick my mom up.

I go to bed at 9:30/10:00

Jasmine

11/17/2016 08:25:25 am

I think it might have to be a little bit longer but it was still good

Shmil

11/16/2016 07:26:19 pm

This is my after school routine. Firstly, I put my backpack at the right place. Secondly, I do the website and my homework. Thirdly, I read books, draw, or go to the library. Lastly, I babysit my baby sister.Now, my bedtime routine. Firstly, I eat dinner. Secondly, I take brush my teeth. Thirdly, I take a shower (I take a shower at morning sometimes too). Thirdly, I put on my pajama's. Lastly, I go to bed. Those are my after school routine and my bedtime routine! Bye!

Ashley

11/16/2016 07:40:22 pm

List for Afterschool:
1. Come home from school
2. Put bag away
3. Check website (if not posted I play roblox till it is)
4. Clean up
5. Clean room
6. Eat dinner
7. Play with rats
8. Hold snake
9. Brush teeth
10. Brush hair
11. Put PJ's on
12. Watch Youtube videos
13. Check website for Feedback
14. Make bed
15. Turn off lights
16. text friends
17. sleep
18 Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Paragraph form:
*Yawns* I come home from school, I'm tired and my head hurts from all that thinking. I take my heavy bag and put it aside of my bed. I stretch because my bag gave me a workout. I ask my nana if I could use her computer to check the website, its not posted yet... I play ROBLOX until it is posted. It finally posts, I do my P.A.R and close the computer. I go downstairs to clean up my room and kitchen. Right after I finish, my mom comes home from work. My mom makes us dinner. ( for an example, Fish n chips.) I finish my dinner, I got play with Cookie and Kiwi, they work on tricks and I always give them a treat for being so cute. After I'm done with the Rats, I move on to my snake. I hold him for 30 minutes, he likes to wrap himself on my arm to make a bracelet. I go back downstairs, I Brush my teeth and hair for the night. (I brush my hair at night so it Doesn't get tangled in the morning) After I'm done brushing my hair and teeth, I get my PJ's on (the comfiest kind) and hop into my bed. I take my phone out and watch Guava Juice on you tube. After watching the daily videos, I check the website again to see if I got feedback. I get out of my bed and make it before I hop in again. I turn off the lights and snuggle up to my blanket and text my friends ( Xaviery, Shmil, Amir, And Jennifer) I finally go to sleep and hope I will wake up in the morning. Zzzzzzzzzzzz

Jasmine

11/17/2016 08:24:16 am

You watch guava juice too ( ps I can not find any spelling mistakes)

Amir

11/16/2016 07:55:53 pm

(My after school routine):
(First), I comb my hair (Second), take a shower and change my clothes (Third), i check the website for P.A.R (Fourth), i play video games. (Fifth), i eat dinner. (Sixth), i do my homework.
(My bedtime routine):
(First), i change into my pj's.(Second), i brush my teeth.(Third), i go on my ipad and watch youtube (Fourth), i go to sleep until the morning.

Amir

11/16/2016 07:57:00 pm

I meant watch YouTube videos lol

Tyler

11/16/2016 08:02:15 pm

YEET come home throw my backpack eat then watch youtube or chill.
Clean my room,play basketball,do homework then at 9:00 shower then change into clothes watch more YouTube then lay down on my bed with my IPad or iPhone then drop it on my face a couple of times then at 10:00-11:00 go to bed.

Jared

11/16/2016 08:02:49 pm

My after school routine
From when I get home till 6:00 pm I play on my computer or x-box
then I eat dinner and after dinner I check the website
after checking the website I play video games and at 10.30 I go to bed
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yea that what ima say

Tyler

11/16/2016 08:21:56 pm

I think you should add periods and commas

Elenoa

11/16/2016 08:04:35 pm

Firstly, when I get home I have a shower and wash my hair ( not everyday tho )
.After, i get out and change into clean clothes , then sorta clean my room after i'm done all that.
Secondly , i go have a snack and during, i have a little snack i do my homework
Thirdly, when i'm done my homework I go watch Netflix or Youtube
Fourthly , before i go to bed i brush my teeth , and floss ( sometimes I forget)
Fifthly , I go lay down and read a book.

Elenoa

11/16/2016 10:29:03 pm

(Revised)
Firstly, when I get home I have a shower and wash my hair ( not everyday tho )
.After, i get out and change into clean clothes , then sorta clean my room after i'm done all that.
Secondly , i go have a snack and during, i have a little snack i do my homework
Thirdly, in the middle of doing homework i have dinner. When i'm done my homework I go watch Netflix or Youtube
Fourthly , before i go to bed i brush my teeth , and floss ( sometimes I forget)
Fifthly , I go lay down and read a book.

ben

11/16/2016 08:08:04 pm

My after school routine
Firstly doing my homework(unless if Mr. Hong post late)then I play on the computer.
Next if Mr. Hong still did not post yet then I eat my dinner.
Finally shower then wait for Mr. Hong to post and go to bed around 9:30-10:00

ben

11/16/2016 08:08:38 pm

I forgot the period.

ben

11/16/2016 08:09:15 pm

(Revised)
My after school routine
Firstly doing my homework(unless if Mr. Hong post late)then I play on the computer.
Next if Mr. Hong still did not post yet then I eat my dinner.
Finally shower then wait for Mr. Hong to post and go to bed around 9:30-10:00.

ben

11/16/2016 08:09:43 pm

Ok better now.

Tyler

11/16/2016 08:18:29 pm

Revised
YEET firstly come home throw my backpack eat then watch youtube or chill.
Secondly Clean my room,play basketball,do homework then at 9:00 shower then change into clothes watch more YouTube then lay down on my bed with my IPad or iPhone then drop it on my face a couple of times then at 10:00-11:00 finally go to bed.

DavidR

11/16/2016 08:19:43 pm

¥¥¥¥¥¥¥¥¥¥Night Routines¥¥¥¥¥¥¥¥¥¥
1.Come home
2.take off clothes
3.take a shower
4.check the website to see if Mr.Hong posted
5.take a nap
6.eat food
7.play a little bit of games
8.check if Mr.Hong posted again and then do my PAR
9.THE BEST OF THEM ALL SLEEP!!!

That's it

Logan

11/16/2016 09:40:50 pm

@David R good job but the criteria says paragraph form

Tyler

11/16/2016 08:20:14 pm

Tami

11/16/2016 08:33:16 pm

My after school routine
I come home eat dinner shower after that then I go on my bad watch YouTube video then I get called downstairs to basically get called downstairs to watch a family movie we do that kinda every day that finishes at like 9:00 then my parents go to sleep then me and my sister watch a show on Netflix we watch that intill 11:00 then I go to the bathroom brush my teeth then I come lay on my bed check the website is the last thing I do so I sleep around 12:00 and if I have homework I put a alarm then wake up at like 5:00 then do my homework then go back to sleep

Don't worry that is just a prank bro

11/16/2016 08:35:10 pm

Shmil

11/16/2016 08:47:30 pm

Is your name suppose to be Tamim? Not Tami? xD

Tamim

11/16/2016 10:17:36 pm

It was all part of the plan

Jasmine

11/17/2016 08:22:02 am

I think you wrote your name wrong but other than that it's good

Shaan

11/16/2016 08:50:29 pm

This is what I do after school.
1 I make something to eat.
2 practice some soccer 45 minutes or 1 hour.
3 Play video games mostly fifa 17. I like it has 2 of my most favourite things soccer and video game.
4 check for post and response. At 9:00.
5 Go to sleep at 10:00 and sometimes 10:30

Shmil

11/16/2016 08:57:30 pm

@Shaan - You're suppose to do it as a paragraph. ( ಠ ヘ ಠ )
But you did well! \( ◕ ᗜ ◕ )/

Logan

11/16/2016 09:42:09 pm

@Shaan you did good but that can't be all you do after school and before you go to bed

Shaan

11/16/2016 08:52:27 pm

Oh yeah I forgot I check for par then I take a shower. After the shower I do the par.

Jacob

11/16/2016 08:56:32 pm

My After School Stuff :D
1) I get home unpack my backpack
2) I have a snack and watch you tube
3) Then after my laziness I do Chores
4) I vacuum,dust,clean my cats popper, do the dishes.
5) Then I play with Jason.Ali,Malcolm and my some times cousin
6) Then I eat dinner (nothing to crazy)
7) After I post but today I went out to the movies with scouts(witch i have every Wednesday)
8) I get In bed and I draw stuff or watch Futurerama
9) Then at 9:00 or 9:30 I hit the hay (witch is go to bed)
10) And I some times practice my bass clarinet
~Jacob :D 10/10 According to my mother

Jacob

11/16/2016 08:58:36 pm

My cat says hello world :3

Ali

11/16/2016 10:04:01 pm

Goof good good

Chance

11/16/2016 09:07:54 pm

As soon as I come back for school I play video games, than I take shower, Change, and than I eat and go to bed at 10:00

Dyamontae

11/16/2016 09:23:33 pm

Firstly right when I get home from school I come home and play a few video games or watch TV until dinner is ready secondly once I am done dinner I come here to post my response like I am doing now and in conclusion I watch netflix on my phone and I slowly start to fall asleep hon estoy I have no idea why but bright lights make me tired so as I'm watching my phone it makes me drowsy weird huh

Logan

11/16/2016 09:43:53 pm

Lol dyamontae same

ALI

11/16/2016 09:58:30 pm

MY AFTERSCHOOL ROUTINE
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1. I COME HOME FROM SCHOOL

2. I GO TO THE WASHROOM

3. I GET NEW CLOTHES

4. I EAT DINNER

5. I WATCH ROMANATWOOD ON YOUTUBE

6. I GO TO THE WASHROOM AGAIN

7. I WATCH YOUTUBE AGAIN

8. I DO HOMEWORK IF I HAVE HOMEWORK

9. I WATCH MORE YOUTUBE

10. I GET ON PS4

11. I GET OFF PS4

12. I EAT A SNACK

13. I CHECK THE WEBSITE

14. I WATCH MORE YOUTUBE

15. I GO TO THE WASHROOM

16. TAKE A SHOWER

17. BRUSH MY TEETH

18. TAKE NEW CLOTHES FOR THE NEXT DAY

19. I GET MY PJ ON

20. GET IN BED

21. I WATCH THE WALKING DEAD

22. I WATCH MORE YOUTUBE

23. I SLEEP AT 10:00 10:45
------------------------------------------------
AND THAT MY ARTERSCHOOL ROUTINE

Elenoa

11/16/2016 10:04:46 pm

@ Ali - MR.Hong said to do it in paragraph form and you have to use transition words.

Elenoa

11/16/2016 10:05:51 pm

@ MR.Hong - I tried going on Fresh Grade and i forgot but did you send the code to our parents?

Xaviery

11/16/2016 10:10:23 pm

During Monday, Tuesday, and Friday, I have a normal "After School Routine". While Wednesday and Thursdays, I deliver newspapers with my little bro and it's a different schedule than the other three...

So firstly, on my normal after school routine, I'll have a snack because I'm hungry. Of course, who wouldn't be hungry after school? While eating, I read manga online. Then, when I get bored from reading, I whether draw, watch anime, or play on my phone. As soon as our dad came home from work, I still continue what I'm doing.

After dinner, I usually wash the dirty dishes and dry them up by tomorrow morning. Finally when I'm done, I quickly go to my computer and go to our classroom website.

When I'm ready to go to bed, I go to the washroom and wash my face or take a shower if I needed it (I mostly take a shower at night time because it feels cool and fresh when I sleep and it feels comfortable too! My mom disagrees with it because she said it's not good when my hair is wet when I'm sleeping...).

Wednesdays and Thursdays "After School Routine":

1.) Have a snack
2.) Deliver papers (I hate this part... DX)
3.) I can do whatever I want to do
4.) Eat dinner
5.) I have Scouts (7:30 pm - 9:30 pm?)
6.) Wash dishes
7.) Do P.A.R. or other homeworks
8.) Prepare for bed

DONE! ^^;

Richard

11/17/2016 03:52:15 pm

Nice work Jasmine. But when you make the list with all those numbers you should maybe add what time it happens.

Jasmine

11/17/2016 08:20:34 am

After school routine :
First after school I come home and make lunch for all my siblings
Second then I eat lunch and check the website for any new postings
Third I tell my cousins to stop fighting and either watch tv or play in the tree house , fourth Watch TV in my moms room with my younger sister and older sister and older brother and three younger cousins
Fifth I will notice my mom is here with her boyfriend

Night routine:

First I will help my mom make dinner while the boys are running around second we will also have the table tell me the living room and after dinner we will brush our teeth and sleep

The End

Richard

11/17/2016 03:44:52 pm

================after school====================
I come home and play minecraft until my mom comes home at 5:00. Sometimes i do my PAR at like 3:00. When my mom comes home i do my homework from school other then PAR.
================bed time===================
I brush my teeth and go to bed. :D

Richard

11/17/2016 03:48:39 pm

================after school====================
The first thing i do when i come home from school is.. play minecraft until my mom comes home at 5:00. Secoundly i sometimes i do my PAR at like 3:00 or when my mom comes back from work. When my mom comes home i do my homework from school other then PAR
================bed time===================
Afterwards when its 9:00, I brush my teeth and go to bed. :D

Richard

11/17/2016 03:49:15 pm

This is revised

Logan

11/17/2016 03:57:36 pm

You spelled secondly wrong but otherwise nice job.

Vera

12/5/2016 11:42:40 am

I come home from school I look for something to eat then I do my French and Art homework then I play ROBLOX or School of Dragons and animal jam are educational games until 6 pm when my dad comes home an hour later my mom comes home
Then at 9 pm I go to bed

Avy

12/5/2016 11:42:51 am

My bed time routine!!!
1st: I get home and take a shower just because I don't want to be dirty.
2nd:After I get out of the shower I my toothbrush and brush my teeth
3rd:I go on the website and see if you posted
4th: After I do that then I go to sleep

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