Onomatopoeia Song

1/22/2019

Today, we started the day by building our background knowledge in ART. We learned more about Roy Lichtenstein and his style of pop art. We discussed elements/principles of art and design that contribute to the look of his work. This included lines, shapes, colours, and patterns. We then looked at quality examples to create criteria as a class in order to understand what to shoot for when creating our artwork. We are looking forward to seeing you go through the learning process with your Lichtenstein-inspired onomatopoeia artwork.

1.) MATH:

Pg 112-113 Qu: #1-10
Mark and correct at home.
This will be collected tomorrow and evaluated on FreshGrade.

2.) FRESHGRADE:

Ask your parents to make some comments on FreshGrade. Here is a link to some sentence starters they can use.

3.) POST A RESPONSE:

Based on what we did in ART class today, what are 3 criteria points you feel Mr. Fisher and I must include on the criteria sheet for the Roy Lichtenstein inspired onomatopoeia Art?
This can include points we created as a class.
You must explain why you feel we should include the 3 criteria points for this assignment. Do not simply 'LIST' 3 points.
Self-assess your work for the givens: spelling, grammar, sentence structure, capitals, etc.
Edit/revise if necessary.

VIDEO LINKS:
Onomatopoeia Song

Sophia

1/22/2019 03:06:34 pm

1st!! Yay

c w

1/22/2019 03:22:25 pm

Ariel

1/22/2019 05:06:21 pm

Some things that should be included in the criteria for the Lichtenstein inspired onomatopoeia art is neatness, colours matching the theme and a matching onomatopoeia. The reason why neatness should be on the criteria is that it would look better. I The reason why you should add colours matching the theme is that, if you add colours that are related to the thing your drawing it would really match. Some colours don’t really pair up together. I think this was the most important one, a related onomatopoeia. If your art has an exploding airplane, the onomatopoeia could be something like “boom”, not something like “meow”, I mean I guess you could but it could be confusing.

PKM

1/22/2019 07:01:28 pm

Ariel, I love your paragraph, your third sentence should not have I at the beginning of the sentence.

PKM

1/22/2019 06:11:06 pm

Some things that should be included in the crietia for the Lichtenstein inspired onomatopoeia art is colours, neatness, and the themes. The reason why neatness should be on the creitia so it would look neat. The reason why you should add colours in the art because to make it colourful and use same colours. The reason why you should have a theme because having a theme will be balance than having more theme in one art piece. If your art is picture of a thunder, the onomatopoeia were be crack not something like woof or meow. I guess you would think that meow and woof would be wrong words to put as an onomatopoeia word for a picture of a thunder.

Mr. Hong

1/22/2019 06:35:12 pm

@ PKM - Look closely at your first sentence. Do you see a spelling error? :-)This word is also spelled incorrectly in your second sentence.

PKM

1/22/2019 06:55:59 pm

Thanks you for the feedback Mr.Hong.

PKM

1/22/2019 06:54:57 pm

Some things that be included in the criteria for the Lichtenstein inspired onomatopoeia art are colours, neatness and the themes. The reason why neatness should be on the criteria because the art would look neat. The reason why you should add colours in the art because to make it colourful and use same colours in the art. The reason why you should have a theme because having a theme will look balance than having more themes in one art piece. If your art is a picture of a thunderstorm, the onomatopoeia were be CRACK or BLAST not something like woof or meow. I guess you would think that meow or woof would be wrong words to put as an onomatopoeia word for a picture of a thunderstorm.

Mr. Hong

1/23/2019 07:11:57 am

@ PKM - Well done!

Sad Unid

1/22/2019 07:04:23 pm

UUGH this is gonna hurt.

As we were creating the criteria as a group, there were some minor yet useful additions I had though of, but I never made the suggestion. I would have mentioned ths, but many of the things I say are usually overlooked, and deemed unnecessary (Which is fair), so I didn't try my luck. One example of the ideas I had developed was that the Onomatopoeia had to contain a appropriate word, if a wave had crashed on someone, it would be wrong for the onomatopoeia to make a bang or boom sound. Another example that was generated was regarding the colours. I would say that depending on the image, any colour can be used as long as it has a bright hue, it may be used. The last listed example is that something in the criteria should change, and people are free to disagree. I feel that receiving an extending mark would not force the student to use different forms of colouring, if too many different materials were to be used, the artwork may come off less as an Roy Liechtenstein inspired piece, and more of a child's interpretation of a pop art piece.

UGH WHY CAN'T I WRITE MORE D:

Justin

1/22/2019 07:45:16 pm

@ Unaid - Wow! I really liked how detailed you were and how you gave examples to your points. However, there are some improvements that can be made. Rereading your writing would help to find minor spelling mistakes. Also, be careful of run-on sentences. You need a conjunction word when combining to sentences (and, but, or, so, yet, etc.), and make sure to not have too many (at most 2) of them. Other than that, great job!

Mr. Hong

1/23/2019 07:12:21 am

@ Unaid - Quality over quantity! :-)

1/22/2019 07:44:31 pm

third, lol

Miranda

1/22/2019 07:45:22 pm

Fourth

Justin

1/22/2019 07:58:17 pm

It sure is fascinating to learn about the different perspectives and views of artists and how they make their art. I am excited to make a “pop art”. Of course, the success criteria is the most important part to achieving “extending” and success. Though we came up with a few points today, I’m sure that there can be more improvements.

One of which is the neatness of the art. This may include the finelining, colouring/painting, and even outlining the whole picture. This can especially stand out when it comes to the final piece. Another important element I think we should add is the creativity of it. The picture chosen and the art presented needs to be unique. You can experiment will all sorts of lines, shapes, and colours. Lastly, the popping effects must be included. This can be shown by lines, shapes, icons, and many more. For example, you may use this to make the onomatopoeia stand out more. Or maybe, you can use this to make the key object in your picture stand out.

In conclusion, this is what I think should be added to the criteria. I hope that by reviewing closely at the success criteria, everyone will be able to follow instructions and get “extending”!

NICK

1/22/2019 08:08:23 pm

One of the things that should be included in the criteria is effort, because I think everyone can and should put effort into their work and try their best.

I also think that the artwork should contain an appropriate word for the theme. For example, If someone was slamming the door, the sound would be slam, and most likely not something like woof.

Lastly, I think that we should use colours matching the theme of your artwork, because if your colours match it would definitely look better (at least for me).

Miranda

1/22/2019 08:12:10 pm

Okay, so I have to make this Roy Lichtenstein art. I guess I'll just do whatever seems right!

No, no, no. There should always be success criteria when making something... especially when you don't know how to. Today, we made criteria points for how to make onomatopoeia pop art. But maybe there are a few things we left out.

First of all, I think that there should be more colors. As long as those colors are bright and bold, they should be okay. The colors should be vivid and easy to see from far away. If we are only limited to the primary colors, black and white, there aren't many unique patterns we could do.

Second, we could also make sure that the words that are used match up to the picture shown. It wouldn't make sense if the wind went "clangggg", right? Also, we should be able to think of our own unique and original sounds because there are many different ones.

Lastly, I think that a criteria point should be to have a few different ideas in order for us to have many different choices of what to choose and do. We could also do drafts so we know exactly what we will draw on the real canvas/paper.

In conclusion, these are a few things that I feel should be added to the criteria list.

Anita

1/22/2019 08:19:08 pm

I love art, but is there a thing call criteria? YEp, absoulutely, success criteria is the most important things that can help you improve. even though we created a few criteria today, but I still think it still have some improvement that can make in the pop art.

THe first thing is to use a appropriate word, it can help other people feel the anger or happy that you have, it is important on the pop art because if we didn't use correct word on the pop art, it could misunderstood people, for example, if you are drawing a people kicking soccer, but you use the word 'crassh', it is just not make sense. The other thing that we can add to our criteria is neatness, it included coulour maching and painting, you can draw an outline in the picture or draw dots in your picture, as long as you don't copy others.

In concluision, those are the two things that I think should add to the criteria. I think everyone would follow the criteria and get a good mark.

1/22/2019 08:30:25 pm

maybe read the criteria again, you have to list three reasons

Anita

1/22/2019 08:46:26 pm

I love art, but is there a thing call criteria? YEp, absoulutely, success criteria is the most important things that can help you improve. even though we created a few criteria today, but I still think it still have some improvement that can make in the pop art.

THe first thing is to use a appropriate word, it can help other people feel the anger or happy that you have, it is important on the pop art because if we didn't use correct word on the pop art, it could misunderstood people, for example, if you are drawing a people kicking soccer, but you use the word 'crassh', it is just not make sense. The other thing that we can add to our criteria is neatness, it included coulour maching and painting, you can draw an outline in the picture or draw dots in your picture. Lastly, I think we should have creativity in our drawing because that can make your art more interesting and more passions things in it.

In concluision, those are the two things that I think should add to the criteria. I think everyone would follow the criteria and get a good mark.

1/22/2019 08:20:25 pm

Yay! art again! I love art!
Now we need a criteria sheet. First on the criteria it should include the sound. Second it should include dots. And last it should have different things. (marker, paint, paper, crayons ect.

)cw

1/22/2019 08:46:08 pm

@ Raymond
u should capitalize your "art" and write etc. write and also finish your bracket. U shud write way more

write...….Write
more___more

Mr. Hong

1/23/2019 07:13:02 am

@ RZ - Don't go straight into your supporting details. Provide some sort of bridge. :-)

Zarif

1/22/2019 08:31:25 pm

How did the words make the sound? Onomatopoeia is when a word's pronunciation imitates its sound and likewise a word that sounds like what it describes. When you say an onomatopoeic word, it sounds like the noise to which you are referring to.

Learning from Roy Lichtenstein is inspiring because he creates paintings into an onomatopoeia. I think Mr. Fisher and Mr. Hong should use the three following criteria namely: first of, is the Sound or Word Voice because it will show the different words you could use to represent a sound or noise. Secondly, Symbolism or Graphic quality due to the symbols used and colors can create a design. Lastly, Art lesson or content, for the reason of what it conveys and the thought that defines the picture on the painting.

Therefore, knowing these three criteria would serve as a guide and will teach us a lesson about fun in righting technique called Onomatopoeia.

SOM

1/22/2019 08:40:50 pm

This was a very interesting video that we watched today. I think it was very enjoyable and fun to watch.

In your Roy Lichtenstein art you should have thick lines, or thin lines to express how you want them to feel in your art. You should have bright colours to express more of the comic look your going for. Last but not least you should have dots to get that real Roy Lichtenstein look to it.

Even listing out three I could list out even more. These are good points your going to need in your artwork to make it really stand out.

(I typed this out on a different website so sorry if it’s not grammarly correct. Also, this is my new nickname so don’t ask)

1/22/2019 08:50:34 pm

who are you

1/22/2019 08:54:13 pm

Sameer
Shannon
Sophia

1/23/2019 04:15:25 pm

non

1/22/2019 08:42:00 pm

Isn't it great to draw art, which are like cartoons? I bet it will be GREAT fun! There's only one problem, if the drawing is not that good... And there is a way we could stop that from happening: Criteria charts. These are some things we can include on the criteria charts.

The first point that should be in the criteria chart should be to keep your drawing nice and tidy. You won't need to have sketch lines all over the place, and keep them a strait line. Also, with coloring, it doesn't matter what you use, but don't leave the lines. Another point is to keep things "real. Like we are not going to draw purple apples or blue trees. You should make apples red, green or yellow, and trees, white, brown, and green. The last point is to have onomatopoeia! Tis is really important because that you zshould actually use onomatopoeia. The art should have like a bang, if you're shooting a gun, grash, if you crash into something, or munch, if you're eating a RED apple.

In conclusion, those are the criteria you should add, and you should keep your drawing good and nice. If it is good, then people will like it, and it will be great to have a good drawing. Have fun drawing!

1/22/2019 08:49:16 pm

Isn't it great to draw art, which are like cartoons? I bet it will be GREAT fun! There's only one problem, if the drawing is not that good... And there is a way we could stop that from happening: Criteria charts. These are some things we can include on the criteria charts.

The first point that should be in the criteria chart should be to keep your drawing nice and tidy. You won't need to have sketch lines all over the place, so keep them one strait line going through, not more than one. Also, with coloring, it doesn't matter what you use, but don't draw past the lines. Then it will look bad. Another point is to keep things "real. Like we are not going to draw purple apples or blue trees. You should make apples red, green or yellow, and trees, white, brown, and green. It will make it look more realistic and better. The last point is to have onomatopoeia! This is really important because that you should actually use onomatopoeia. The art should have like a bang, if you're shooting a gun, crash, if you crash into something, or munch, if you're eating a RED apple.

In conclusion, those are the criteria you should add, and you should keep your drawing good and nice. If it is good, then people will like it, and it will be great to have a good drawing. Have fun drawing, and make it good!

Wendy

1/22/2019 08:50:38 pm

If we’re to make success criteria for this Roy Lichtenstein inspired art, I think we should include these point in our artwork in order to do pop art as Roy Lichtenstein did. Here are some criteria points that I would like mention.

One of the criteria points is the neatness of our art, the reason why neatness is important because it will surely affect how your final artwork looks like. Would you like your artwork ended up with a messy looking? I guess not, so we better pay attention to the neatness and organization parts. Another criteria point that we should include in our artwork would be the coloring part, though many of us suggested to keep conservative, use more solid color, I think we should use our creativity when we’re doing art, we should have a variety of elements included, since we’re never trying to ordinary, we’re all making something special. Last but not least, we’re never to forget the onomatopoeia part of Pop Art. That awesomeness of pop art. We’re going to use onomatopoeia to express our passion or feeling through our artwork!

In conclusion, that’s some of the criteria points that I think we should include in our criteria for this Roy Lichtenstein inspired pop art.

Max

1/22/2019 08:55:27 pm

Three very critical criteria points required for the Roy Lichtenstein inspired onomatopoeia artworks are words (the onomatopoeia) and a matching image to pair up with your onomatopoeia, neatness and creativity and of course, bright, vivid primary colours.

First of all, without any onomatopoeia, your art would be missing the most significant characteristic of Roy Lichtenstein style art. Of course, you definitely need a matching image to complement your art. However, it needs to be reasonable and relevant. For instance, if you drew a picture of a detonating missile, but for some awkward reason, you depicted the missile making the sound effect 'Burp,' then it would be a very nonsensical action.

Another characteristic of Roy Lichtenstein's art is the abundance of vibrant colours, such as red, yellow and blue, thick popping black lines, and classic ben-day dots.

Finally, your artwork obviously needs to be neat. If your art is not neat, then it fails to appeal to your audience and ruins the whole purpose. "Creativity is in your hands" -Mr. Hong. The main idea of Roy Lichtenstein inspired art is not to completely plagiarise his work and replicate it, instead, it is to create your own artistic masterpiece which should look similar to one by Roy Lichtenstein.

In summary, three key criteria points required for an extending Roy Lichtenstein inspired onomatopoeia arts are tidiness and originality, use of onomatopoeia and a corresponding image, and expressive use of the primary colours.

Adrian

1/22/2019 09:03:33 pm

OUCH! I stuck my foot in between of my bed! What will happen when both cars crash together! BOOM! CRASH! These are all Onomatopoeia. And these must have to be included in our art.

Based on the art lesson today, we learnt a lot of pop art about Roy Lichtenstein, all about his art and their culture. We did discuss a lot of the pop art, and our criteria points. First of all, we have to create an interesting and creative Onomatopoeia. Of course, they must have to make senses. Onomatopoeia means "to make a name (or sound)." ----from the internet. It means Onomatopoeia is the sound, but with words. We usually see it in comics or graphic novels. We must have Onomatopoeia to be the sound, or it will be boring.

Secondly, it is neatness. We can also use different strategies to create our art, such as lines, dots, primary colours, etc. Neatness could make our art to be more creative or maybe more formal too? Perhaps, neatness must help us to make better art. Third, we have to use different colours which matches the title of our pop art. Colours could be different in our art. We can according to what colours we like or the feel and style of the piece of art to choose which colours should we use. Different colours could affect a lot of our pop art, so choosing the right colour is extremely important.

Pop art, we can use different strategies, criteria points are thing we can use. We just have to put out emotions, feeling, and the style of culture into it. Perhaps, sometimes we have to use our own technique to make an amazing and unique “masterpiece”.

shannon

1/22/2019 09:34:54 pm

Criteria is fun!

As we were doing criteria, I might have zoned out for a split second. This is also something I'm working on improving. So, in my opinion, some key criteria points are…
1. Bright bold colours that pop. (preferably primary colours)
In my opinion, the primary colours symbolize plain and simple. Pop art to me is a simple piece of art with a bigger meaning behind it. Like there's more below the surface. So the colours influences the eye of the observer, to observe it as simple at first glance. Bright colours also express this fierce emotion. This is also important to onomatopeias.
2. Another point would be to not overdo your artwork. Small lines and details are unnecessary and will not enhance your artwork. Like I said before pop art is usually simple.
3. My last point would be neat and organized. This is the what brings the art together for me. I like how everything just falls together. I see that everything was organized and neatly done.

In conclusion pop art to me is to just not overthink it. Sometimes you have to go with your instinct and let loose. To me, this is what makes real art.

Mr. Hong

1/23/2019 07:13:26 am

@ Shannon - Building criteria is fun! :-)

olivia

1/22/2019 11:44:17 pm

Whaam!' is Roy Lichtenstein's most famous painting. And today we have to come up the criteria for it, after looking at the art and doing some research about the it. I began to understand and try make some criteria for it. First of all I think the neatness of the art, then it should be the colour. Last but not the least it should be the popping effects, and also the the creativity must be included.

Vicky

1/23/2019 12:00:08 am

"WHAAM"! That's the name of a piece by the artist Roy Lichtenstein.

We were talking about him in class today during our art period. Before we start the actual project, we need to talk about the criteria because without it, you don't exactly have something to follow to reach the learning intention do you? I think one ting that should definitely be included in the criteria is that it should definitely have those thick black lines that really stand out, giving the artwork that bold, 1950'a comic book look. Another thing would be the benday dots. Usually, they are used for skin work on a character. Sometimes artists would overlap them for shadowing work in the skin or whatever they're working with. The last thing would be something Mr. Hong and Mr. Fisher mentioned. We have to use at least three different things in our art. For example, markers, pencil crayons and construction paper or something like that. I would probably use simply paper, makers/sharpies and pencil crayons. I chose these three things because certain elements together could ruin your art. For example, if you're not careful and have no clue what you're doing, a combination like paint, markers, sharpies, and pencil crayons could look very messy.

Overall, these are the three things that I think should be in the criteria. Thick bold black lines, at least three forms of materials in your art and the benday dots.

Dennis

1/23/2019 07:53:24 am

WHAAM one of Roy Lichenstein's most famous pieces of POP ART and honestly, WHAAM is in my perspective the most amazing piece of POP ART.

Wow, learning about Roy Lichtenstein is fun, because his art was simply satisfying, and now we are learning how to make our own Roy Lichtenstein inspired POP ART.
And first of all, you need to know who he is until you are able to understand his art and how he makes it so look so satisfying. And some things you must include in your Pop Art, like for instants when you look at Roy’s art he used 1950 to 1960s comic book panels and re-created them into something more attractive and the original piece in my opinion, And Roy also used big thick and wide black paint to paint the outline of the item ( whatever he is drawing ) and at the time most artists did not use thick and wide black paint at all, but Roy did and it was total success. And we also must include the small little dots that really gave the effect for Roy’s art and the dot have to made up of would solid colours or original colours like red and yellow.

I would highly suggest using my own personal success criteria to make a successful Roy Lichtenstein inspired Pop Art!
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Emily

1/23/2019 08:02:13 am

OOF, BAFF, POW, are all onomatopoeia. (From the 1966 Batman show.) Did you ever notice that it shows up when Batman and/or Robin are fighting crime?

For our Roy Lichtenstein art it should include some action. Something that will look like it came straight out of Batman, like a fight? Even a video game would work. Take Super Smash Bros Brawl, you need to choose a character in order to play. So that leads up to my second criteria point. You need to have something that creates the action, anything. Using the special move for Snake? BOOM! (Sorry, it may not be accurate to the Nintendo Switch version because it's based off of the Wii.) Which brings me to my third point. The word must be accurate. The action you come up with must math the word. Like a flock of ducks wouldn't go Meow. They would go QUACK! Or maybe its a hybrid of part cat-duck, so it says both quack and meow.

I know I listed all the main and obvious ones but a I only did that because I don't know how to explain the other criteria parts. I believe my points will be somewhere within the criteria because it's one of the main points. So I just took the easy road, yep. WAABAM!

Emily

1/23/2019 08:08:15 am

OOF, BAFF, POW, are all onomatopoeia. (From the 1966 Batman show.) Did you ever notice that it shows up when Batman and/or Robin are fighting crime?

For our Roy Lichtenstein art it should include some action. Something that will look like it came straight out of Batman, like a fight? Even a video game would work. Take Super Smash Bros Brawl, you need to choose a character in order to play. So that leads up to my second criteria point. You need to have something that creates the action, anything. Using the special move for Snake? BOOM! (Sorry, it may not be accurate to the Nintendo Switch version because it's based off of the Wii.) Which brings me to my third point. The word must be accurate. The action you come up with must match the word. Like a flock of ducks wouldn't go Meow. They would go QUACK! Or maybe it's a hybrid of part cat-duck, so it says both quack and meow... But what if it had feathers on a cat body? Or would it be fur with a duck bill? Could it be furry feathers? That's odd.

I know I listed all the main and obvious criteria points but a I only did that because I don't know how to explain the other criteria parts. I believe my points will be somewhere within the criteria because it's one of the main points. So I just took the easy road, yep. WAABAM!

Kevin

1/24/2019 10:23:12 pm

Have you ever wanted to create a great piece of art? During the lesson, I was astonished at how complex the different perspectives of each artist is and it was fun learning about them.
I am excited to make pop art because I feel that it can fuel my creativity and make me feel more like an artist. In order to strive at a project, I need to follow success criteria. However, I strongly believe that there are a few things we can add to the current success criteria to make our art stand out.

To succeed, we must make the art very neat. In order to make our paintings neat, we can fine line, color nicely, or outline the entire art picture. This can improve our performance and understanding of the piece. Another important element is to make out art unique and exotic. We can use different shapes or other colors that others haven’t used. This will make our creativity stand out. Lastly, the popping effects are to be included. This can be using 3-D models, line, dots, etc. For example, we may make onomatopoeia stand out more by making it bigger or by adding more bright colors.

In conclusion, I think these are the other elements that should be added to the criteria. I hope that if we all follow criteria, everyone will be able to obtain success.

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