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10/19/2022

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Today, students learned how to do the 'VOLLEYBALL DANCE' in PE. We have been working on movement strategies in volleyball and learning proper techniques that can help them succeed in this sport. Later, they learned how to upload examples of their work onto TEAMS. We will be using TEAMS for their digital portfolios this year. Parents, please ensure you have their login information so you can view their assessments/evaluations on a regular basis. In math, we continued learning about divisibility rules and we continued with our mini-inquiries during Social Studies.

IMPORTANT:
1.) TEAMS: Continue uploading any assignments that have been evaluated so your parents can view them. Provide your parents with your TEAMS login information.
2.) GROUSE GRIND: Return forms and make payment online if you have not yet done so (Himavanth, Wesley, and Herschel).

LEARNING PLANNER:
1.) READING: 25 minutes, log, and have parents initial.

2.) MATH: Complete the worksheet on divisibilty of the number 5.

3.) POST A RESPONSE:

Today, we read about how a person in a wheelchair was caught in the world trade centre and was unable to walk down the stairs on his own. I wonder how he must have felt? I wonder how the other people trying to get down the stairs must have felt?
Write from one or both perspectives! Write from the person in the wheelchair's perspective or from the people waiting behind him. Talk about what must have been going through their minds as they were trying to get down the building!
LEARNING INTENTION: I can explain how different people can have different perspectives in life or death situations.
SUCCESS CRITERIA:
1.) PARAGRAPH FORMAT: intro/body/ conclusion.
2.) GIVENS: Pay close attention to your spelling, capitals, punctuation, grammar, sentence structure, etc.
3.) INTRO: Make it as exciting and engaging as possible.
4.) BODY: Include at least 2-3 examples/supporting points.
5.) CONCLUSION: Tie up your paragraph smoothly.
6.) PEER FEEDBACK/SELF-ASSESSMENT: Give 1 student 2 things to improve on based on the above criteria.
7.) REVISED VERSION: Based on the feedback you receive or the self-assessment you complete, post a revised version as a reply to your original post.

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aishi

10/19/2022 03:27:01 pm

FIRST!

Leah

10/19/2022 03:32:55 pm

Second

Leah

10/19/2022 03:42:38 pm

OUT OF THE WAY!!! Rescuers came rushing by with a person in a wheel chair. They came rushing down through a crowd of people. I wonder how the people felt about it. Well, from their perspective, I could've felt annoyed, because people are paying more attention to one person in a wheelchair, then a whole crowd of people! Then again, I can understand because I mean, if we just left him there, figuring it out himself, that wouldn't really be the right thing to do. So either way, from the crowd's perspective, there could be many possibilities.

Leah

10/19/2022 07:49:09 pm

[REVISED]

OUT OF THE WAY!!! Rescuers swooped past a whole crowd of people, pushing a guy in a wheelchair. He’s more high-maintenance, considering that he’s in a wheelchair, but what about the crowd the rescuers missed?

If I were in that crowd’s perspective, I could’ve probably felt like second-class citizens, or less important. Then again I could’ve at least understand. I mean, you can’t just ignore a guy in a wheel chair, that has no access to an elevator, and has to go down a bunch of stairs. So, think about it, how would you feel if you were in that perspective.

Elton

10/19/2022 03:52:11 pm

3rd

Elton

10/19/2022 04:01:27 pm

How woud you feel if you were in a life or death situation and you see a few people pushing a wheelshair with a man inside? If iw as the personin the wheelchair, i would be really scared because I couldn't just use the elevator down, I would have to have someone take me down the stiars and maybe people wouldn't even care about you because they are trying to save their own lives. In the crowds perspective, They might be feeling anxious or sympathetic because the person in the wheel chair acn't move very weel on their own and might get injured if they try to go down the stairs alone. From different perspectives, people might be thinking different things about different topics.

Elton

10/19/2022 04:12:06 pm

feedback: check givens
How would you feel if you were in a life or death situation and you see a few people pushing a wheelchair with a man inside? If I was the person in the wheelchair, I would be really scared because I couldn't just use the elevator down, I would have to have someone take me down the stairs and maybe people wouldn't even care about you because they are trying to save their own lives. In the crowds perspective, They might be feeling anxious or sympathetic because the person in the wheel chair can't move very well on their own and might get injured if they try to go down the stairs alone. From different perspectives, people might be thinking different things about different topics.

diego

10/19/2022 04:18:54 pm

How you will fell in a dangerous situation and cannot go to the elevator or the stairs because you have a wheelchair.
If you are in a wheelchair and you where in a dangerous moment and cannot use the elevator or the stairs you probably will fell that you are gonna die. For example imagine you broke your bones and now you cannot walk and then you go to the school and in the middle of the lesson the fire drill activated and all of the student start to run but you remember you are in the 2nd floor in the school and there are no elevator you probably fell that is all over.i remember when I twist my feet and I got to school and I need to go to the bathroom bu I didn't now how to go down but then 2 people help me go down and after that I remember that there was a bathroom at the 2 floor.

Mr. T

10/19/2022 05:24:54 pm

@diego I think your connection to a similar experience you had is great! Try to include punctuation to break up the sentences in your paragraph.

Aaron

10/19/2022 08:25:58 pm

@Diego you spelt fell wrong it is feel and fell is felt remember to capitalize! and you forgot the t in but

Aishi

10/19/2022 04:22:03 pm

Boom! Crash! The world trading centre is getting attacked by airplanes... and you're stuck in a wheelchair. Completely stuck inside the building. If I were the one stuck in the wheel chair, I will be really scared. I will be scared because I know I couldn't escape without someone's help. Luckily, in the book other people were helping the man in the wheelchair. Overall, if I was the one who was in the wheelchair, I would be really scared and relieved that someone has come to help me.

Aishi

10/19/2022 08:45:56 pm

Self assessment: I can add more details to my supportive sentences.

Boom! Crash! The world trading centre is getting attacked by airplanes... and you're stuck in a wheelchair. Completely stuck inside the building. If I were the one stuck in the wheel chair, I will be really scared. I will be scared because I know I couldn't escape without someone's help, but I would also understand why if they wouldn't help me. If people were to escape by themselves they would me much faster. If they waited and helped me then they would be wasting time, and what to say that another plane won't crash again. Luckily, in the book other people were helping the man in the wheelchair. Overall, if I was the one who was in the wheelchair, I would be really scared and relieved that someone has come to help me.

Thank you Kaley for giving me ideas.

Kaley

10/19/2022 05:01:52 pm

MOVE OUT OF THE WAY!!!
“What had just happened? They just pushed them like that with no regret???”

2 people and 2 different perspectives. Imagine you’re in a wheelchair. You’re in a dangerous situation and this random person pushes you out of the way trying to escape the building. How would you feel and what would you think? I’d be angry but also understanding because I know that everyone wants to get out of that place and I’m not the centre of attention, however I would still be quite upset. I’d also feel somewhat terrified because I don’t know if I’ll get help or be left there to die.
How would you feel if you were in this situation? Type it out while following the success criteria! :)

Leah

10/19/2022 05:34:51 pm

@Kaley, next time use the word form of a number instead then number itself. Otherwise, it’s very good

Kaley (REVISED)

10/19/2022 07:08:50 pm

MOVE OUT OF THE WAY!!!
“What had just happened? They just pushed them like that with no regret???”

Two people and two different perspectives... One I will try and help you visualize. Now. Imagine you’re in a wheelchair. You’re in a dangerous situation and this random person pushes you out of the way trying to escape the building. How would you feel and what would you think? I’d be angry but also understanding because I know that everyone wants to get out of that place and I’m not the centre of attention, however I would still be quite upset. I’d also feel somewhat terrified because I don’t know if I’ll get help or be left there to die.
How would you feel if you were in this situation? Type it out while following the success criteria! :)

Orion

10/19/2022 05:23:37 pm

MOVE OUT OF THE WAY!!!

Is what a dude e in the read aloud book said as he pushed a helpless dude in a wheel chair if I was in that situation I would be probably brasing my self because the ceiling might collapse on me as I am asking for help. What would you do if you where in this situation.

Zakariya

10/19/2022 05:32:33 pm

were*

Elton

10/19/2022 06:08:55 pm

@Orion
Maybe check the givens and add a bit more detail.

Marius

10/19/2022 08:24:17 pm

@orion u should check your grammar maybe next time you should write a little bit more but otherwise it pretty good

Charley

10/19/2022 05:53:08 pm

Imagine yourself in a desperate situation to do something, but you are incapable of it. All you can do is rely on your other friends. That’s what happened to a person in wheelchair, hoping to escape 911. He sat there, helpless and desperate. I would imagine it is a horrible feeling, to an extent I wouldn’t know how much. How would you feel if you were the helpless person?

Charley

10/19/2022 06:39:00 pm

Feedback please

Aishi

10/19/2022 08:35:53 pm

Here is your feedback.
maybe switch 911 to 9/11 because when I read it the first time I thought it was the police 911.

Kaley

10/19/2022 07:09:37 pm

@charley maybe explain more about how you’d feel if you were in that position. Otherwise it’s great :)

Charley (Revised)

10/26/2022 10:04:49 pm

Imagine yourself in a desperate situation to do something, but you are incapable of it. All you can do is rely on your other friends. That’s what happened to a person in wheelchair, hoping to escape 9/11. He sat there, helpless and desperate. If I were him, I would be overwhelmed with feelings, gratefulness that there is a friends with you who will save your life, and at the same time, anger. Angry that you have to rely on someone else to survive, that you were on a wheelchair, that all you could do was sit there. I would imagine it is a horrible feeling, to an extent I wouldn’t know how much. How would you feel if you were the helpless person?

Aiden

10/19/2022 06:18:45 pm

BOOM! The World Trade Center just got hit by and airplane and you're stuck in it in a wheel chair and the elevators don't work and people are running right passed you. If I were in that situation I would feel scared, worried, and nerves. For example what if you couldn't walk and an emergency happens and everybody has to leave the building but know ones helping you. How would you feel in that situation.

Micah

10/19/2022 09:37:48 pm

@Aiden great paragraph but I think you should write the example before you write "if I were in that situation, I would feel..."

Aiden[revised]

10/19/2022 06:42:24 pm

BOOM! The World Trade Center just got hit by an airplane and you're stuck in a wheel chair. But the elevators don't work and people are running right passed you. If I was in that situation I would feel scared, worried, and nervous. Once I broke my finger and I couldn't write but I had people to help me if I had know one to help me I would be scared because I would not be able to do my work but if it was a life treating situation I would be more scared. For example what if you couldn't walk and an emergency happens and everybody has to leave the building but know ones helping you. How would you feel in that situation?

sohil

10/19/2022 07:17:44 pm

Boom! The world trading center is getting attacked by airplanes!! And you're stuck in a wheelchair completely stuck inside the building... If I were the one stuck in the wheel chair I would be really scared, I will be scared because I know I couldn't escape without someone's help.(DUN DUN DUN) Luckily, in the book other people were helping the man in the wheelchair. Overall if I was the one who was in the wheelchair, I would be really scared and relieved that someone has come to help me. THE END

Marius

10/19/2022 08:20:54 pm

@sohil maybe next time u should add more details

Zakariya

10/19/2022 07:35:57 pm

Imagine you are caught in the World Trade Center during 9/11 attacks, and you are stuck in your wheelchair watching as people pass by and ignore the fact you can't go down stairs like them. "MOVE OUT OF MY WAY" they yell, as you feel totally helpless.

Personally, I couldn't imagine how scared I would feel in this situation. So I will try to imagine the perspective of the handicap and the people going down the stairs behind him in this terrifying situation.

As the person in the wheelchair, I would probably be panicking. I would try to get someone to help me, but everybody is just too busy running for their lives trying to flee to safety. What about me? Can they not see I am disabled? I think.

As one of the people fleeing, I would feel bad for the handicap. "maybe I can flee, but what about him? he has zero chance of making it without help" I think. I would try to get help for the handicap, or maybe try helping him myself. The guilt I would feel if I just left him there hanging, knowing he probably won't make it would be enough.

Overall, I think that situation is very scary and just makes me grateful for my own circumstances.

Marius

10/19/2022 07:37:52 pm

OUT OF THE WAY!!!!!
A plane just hit the building burning hot flames and jet fuel spread all around the place destroying everything in it’s path... but it can’t get worse right?

In the story a man in a wheelchair was in the building when the planes hit the elevator doesn’t work so the only way was to go down the stairs.If I was in that situation I would be so so relieved that someone had the bravery to risk their lives to help someone in need. I would also try to brace myself so I don’t get stepped on. I would also feel terrified and helpless and weak.

So if I was in this situation I definitely would be very freaked out and scared. What will you do if you were in this situation!

Marius

10/19/2022 08:18:40 pm

Pls give me feedback

Aaron

10/19/2022 08:26:58 pm

Aaron

10/19/2022 08:28:47 pm

@Marius you forgot a space after a period

Wesley

10/19/2022 07:39:03 pm

If a plane crashed into a building that I am in and I am in a wheelchair then I would be freaking out. The man in the wheelchair was most likely very scared because he could not take the elevator and he can not go the down stairs. He must have been thinking in his mind that hopefully someone comes and helps him. If I was in that situation I would be nervous and scared. How would you feel if a plane crashed into a building your in and you had to relay on people to help you. At the same time you could not walk, go down stairs, and take the elevator.

Carina c:

10/19/2022 07:47:57 pm

If someone was in a wheelchair was trapped in the world trade center and had to escape but couldn't do it by themselves I imagine they would be thinking "I hope I'm not being a bother anyone. I just want to get down as soon as I can like everyone else. :(" Also, I think that the other people there would think "Wow I wonder if that guy can make it out of here. I feel a bit lucky now that I at least can walk by myself..." Overall being in that situation would be a traumatic experience for anyone.

Emily

10/19/2022 08:42:38 pm

@Carina check the givens, "I hope I'm not being a bother anyone" doesn't quite make sense grammatically. also maybe add how you would feel instead of just what you would think. overall great job 👍

Mr. Hong

10/19/2022 07:54:20 pm

@ Everyone - I am looking forward to reading everyone’s responses! PAR evaluations are happening as we speak! 😀👍

Marius

10/19/2022 08:18:07 pm

Laura link

10/19/2022 08:40:34 pm

thank you Sir

Aaron

10/19/2022 08:18:04 pm

CRASH THUD! If I were in a wheelchair and something crazy happens, I would be freaked out and cry out loud. PLEASE SOMEONE HELP ME! If no one came, what would you do? Keep yelling, or try to go find other people on your floor? I would have tried to go down the stairs because I am crazy. If you saw someone in a wheelchair desperately trying to go down the stairs, I think you would try to keep yourself safe by stopping them and helping them down the stairs. What would you do as someone able to help and as someone who needed help?

Shine

10/19/2022 08:33:26 pm

BOOM ....CRASH.....
"MOVE OUT OF THE WAY!!!"

If I was in a wheelchair during 911 I would be terrified because I would need to take an elevator to get out of the building. I would not be able to use the stairs! If the elevators were not working, I would have to rely on other people when they are already trying to get out of the building. So I would hope that a helpful and caring guy will be willing spend his time to help me.

How would you feel in this situation? Post quickly so the par police doesn’t get ya!!! 👮

Kaila

10/19/2022 08:41:55 pm

BOOM! as the world trade center was hit by a plane people rushed for their life down the stairs until a paramedic pushed threw everyone with somebody in a wheelchair if was just pushed past in a situation like this I would feel irritated because they value the one person in a wheelchair safety over all the people running down, but also if nobody came to help him threw he would be stuck up there with no way down. if I was the person in the wheelchair I would be extremely anxious and scarred with the elevator not working and no way to get down, but also thankful for the person that carried me down the stairs, without them I would have been up there until the fire department came and also I might not have been able to make it out alive.

How would you feel if you were in a situation like this?

Kaila

10/20/2022 07:40:09 am

BOOM! the world trade center was hit by a plane people rushed for their life down the stairs until a paramedic pushed threw everyone with somebody in a wheelchair if was just pushed past in a situation like this I would feel irritated because they value the one person in a wheelchair safety over all the people running down, but also if nobody came to help him threw he would be stuck up there with no way down. If I was the person in the wheelchair I would be extremely anxious and scarred with the elevator not working and no way to get down, but also thankful for the person that carried me down the stairs, without them I would have been up there until the fire department came and also I might not have been able to make it out alive.

How would you feel if you were in this situation?

Owen

10/19/2022 08:51:45 pm

BAKOW! A plane just hit The World Trade Centre. You're stuck in the building scared and your heart is racing while screaming "HELP! I'm in a wheelchair, can someone carry me down the stairs?" You're hoping someone would respond but nobody wanted to help you. So you screamed louder "HLEP! SOMEBODY NEEDS TO CARRY ME DOWN THE STAIRS I'M IN A WHEELCHAIR!!" Finally someone came and decided to help you but, he wasn't strong enough to carry you down the stairs. He told you that he'll be back in a minute to find a person who can lift it with him. After a minute all seems hopeless the man didn't come back! You thought maybe he was stuck in a fire. Until he came with his colleague, he and his colleague carried you down the stairs as fast as possible. They rested many times but they still persisted and carried you down the stairwell. You finally got to the ground! You thank them many times and you took a sigh of relieve. You now feel happy and relieved!

Owen

10/19/2022 08:53:08 pm

Sorry for posting late Mr.Hong, I had to go somewhere

Kaila

10/19/2022 08:56:06 pm

@Owen- you spelled help wrong.

Emily

10/19/2022 09:04:31 pm

(I wasn't here today so I don't know exactly what happened in the book, basing my PAR off of some other people's that I read)

How would you feel if you were in a wheelchair and a plane suddenly crashed into the building you were in? The person in the book must've been terrified, and I would've been too! Since the elevators were stuck because of the plane crash, I would have to simply hope that a few kind people in the chaotic crowd would be willing to help me. Otherwise, I would have no way of getting out on my own and would be left there to die! I would've been really nervous and wanted to scream for help, but maybe I'd be too scared to even make a sound. This tragic event would've been a very painful and scarring experience for everyone in the building, wheelchair or not.

Gavin:)

10/19/2022 09:28:05 pm

why do we have par every day :/

Esther

10/19/2022 09:32:46 pm

Just a normal day in the world trade center, the tallest buildings in New York. You take the elevator to get to work and you arrive at the floor. Suddenly, there's a loud BOOM when you get out. Everyone screams and you're panicking, because you're in a wheelchair. Everybody is shouting and over the chaos, you're lost. People are pushing and shoving, calling 911, and people say that a plane CRASHED into the world trade center. You're panicking, and you get shoved around by the crowd running. Nobody even looks at you, nonetheless helps you.

If I were in that situation, I would be panicking. It is very very hard to get down stairs in a wheelchair and down all those floors? That would be rarely possible. The only thing you can do is wait for 911 emergency responders. You're trapped in a huge building with a plane's weight on it. I would be freaking out and trying to contact my family. My family is really important to me and if I were to be separated from them in a dangerous situation I would full on panic and my heart would be out of my chest. I also hate very loud noises and crowds so I would be too overwhelmed to even find a way out.

Micah

10/19/2022 09:33:52 pm

KABOOOM!!! OH MY! what happened? was it an earthquake? when you look outside you see a plane stuck in the north tower of the famous twin tower.

image yourself in that kind of saturation, what would you feel? fear, panic, worry, startled, surprised/amazed? I would probably be panicking and worried about my safety. However, you see someone in a wheel chair sliding out of control, if I could I would go help and find someone that is calm and nice enough to help. But imagine you are the one who is in the wheel chair, you can't really do anything except for stay calm and wait until someone rescues you, which would be terrifying because you never know if there is anyone that can help you.

Anyhow, the 911 event was terrible and I hope nothing like that ever happens again.

Micah

10/19/2022 09:40:42 pm

KABOOOM!!! OH MY! What happened? Was it an earthquake? When you look outside you see a plane stuck in the north tower of the famous twin tower.

Image yourself in that kind of saturation, what would you feel? Fear, panic, worry, startled, surprised/amazed? I would probably be panicking and worried about my safety. However, if you see someone in a wheel chair sliding out of control, if I could I would go help and find some other people that is calm and nice enough to help. But imagine you are the one who is in the wheel chair, you can't really do anything except for stay calm and wait until someone rescues you, which would be terrifying because you never know if there is anyone that can help you.

Anyhow, the 911 event was terrible and I hope nothing like that ever happens again.

Micah

10/19/2022 09:41:58 pm

Whoops, forgot to write revised beside my name

Kibb

10/19/2022 09:35:28 pm

Imagine if you were in a situation, where you're in the world trade centre on a high floor and a plane hit. I'd be absolutely freaked out, i'd be in a panic to get out of here. I would also beg for help, if someone actually helped, i'd be really thankful and relieved.

And if i was someone who saw a person in a wheelchair in that situation. I would try to help them because because i'd feel bad for them.

What would you do if you were in this situation?

Herschel

10/19/2022 10:07:48 pm

If you were in a building that was burning down, you'd most likely be terrified for your life. Say something else was a factor though: you had a physical disability. How would that affect how you would feel and how much more dangerous this situation would be?

Personally, I would be extremely terrified for my life and hope to everything above that the person assisting me would be able to survive along with me. Additionally, I would feel anxious about the fact that without another person helping me, I probably wouldn't survive. Compared to my life currently, I would definitely feel way more urgency to escape considering the situation I'd be in.

Escaping a huge building that's crumbling and burning down by the minute is difficult, but it's way more when you have a disability that prevents you from being like most people around you. Therefore, this would be my feelings on being in that scenario. That's only how I feel though: what would your reaction be?

Archer

10/19/2022 10:54:11 pm

If you were trying to escape a building that had been attacked I think you would be pretty scared. But listen, what if on top of that you had a physical disability and you were in a wheelchair? You can’t use elevators and your only option is stairs.

If I were in that situation I’d be so scared. Not only did I have to escape the burning building but I had to trust someone I don’t even know with my life in order to even get out of the building!

Would you have the courage to trust someone with your life that easily? Tell me what you think!

(I was grounded I’m sorry 😭🙏)

Gavin:)

10/19/2022 11:03:52 pm

How would feel if you were on a wheelchair on the 83rd floor with no elevator to go down?

The old man would have felt hopeless and terrified because he can't go downstairs or use the elevator. The person behind him would have felt bad for the person in the wheelchair because he can't help the person on the wheelchair.

This is what I would think the person in the wheelchair and the person behind him would feel.

Gavin:)

10/19/2022 11:05:03 pm

don't blame me that I posted at 11 pm

Marius (REVISED)

10/20/2022 07:46:36 am

OUT OF THE WAY!!!!!
A plane just hit the building burning hot flames and jet fuel spread all around the place destroying everything in it’s path... but it can’t get worse right?

In the story a man in a wheelchair was in the building when the planes hit the elevator doesn’t work so the only way was to go down the stairs. If I was in that situation I would be so so relieved that someone had the bravery to risk their lives to help someone in need. I would also try to brace myself so I don’t get stepped on. I would also feel terrified and helpless and weak.

So if I was in this situation I definitely would be very freaked out and scared. What will you do if you were in this situation!

sophie

10/21/2022 10:02:35 pm

Boom!
I was sitting in my wheelchair, minding my own business as I heard the sound. What was that? I thought as people around me panicked and started pushing around. They ran for the stairs without a care for others around them, just run. I would joined them if I could leave that chair. But nope, I couldn't move without someone helping me. Then, rescuers came rushing to my side as the other people stared at me in anger and pity. I did not ask for being in this chair, you know? I thought sadly as faces and faces passed. This is what I would feel if I'm the person in a wheelchair, no one wanted to be stuck on a wheelchair. I once think like the people who would be mad at the person in the wheelchair, but I never thought about what the person would feel. So next time, I leant to be more careful about what I do or say, cause you would never want to be the one to be picked on.

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