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10/30/2013

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LEARNING INTENTIONS:

I can tell tell the difference between a summary and a paraphrase.
I can summarize or paraphrase an article.

1.) MATH/LA/SCIENCE: No homework.

2.) HALLOWEEN PARTY SNACKS:

Click on the links below to let the class know what you're bringing tomorrow!
Kev's link
Maven's link

3.) POST A RESPONSE:

In YOUR OWN WORDS, explain the difference between a summary and a paraphrase.
Be sure to include 2 points for summaries
Be sure to include 2 points for paraphrases

VIDEO LINKS:
Halloween Fun (Only watch this if you are not afraid of ghosts!)

Gamer

10/30/2013 06:25:16 am

First

destiny1445

10/30/2013 07:44:33 am

so not fair

SECOND!!!!!

Icestone

10/30/2013 08:06:43 am

Grade 6/7 Halloween Snacks List 2013:

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0AgrgSZ1ABiNwdFRvakxZd0I3clp5LXZ6UUdUX3NvRHc&usp=sharing

Icestone

10/30/2013 08:08:20 am

Copy/paste that into a new tab/window to get there. Then fill out your name, snack, amount and description of the food you're bringing! ;)

xLio

10/30/2013 09:30:27 am

I am not sure if the desc. is needed?

xLio

10/30/2013 09:59:26 am

If that is too hard use this one too!
http://todaysmeet.com/classsnacks

xLio

10/30/2013 10:01:39 am

http://todaysmeet.com/classsnacks

@ Anyone - Use this one if Icestone's Spreadsheet is hard for you (grade 6's)

SwaggerPuffBoy

10/30/2013 08:22:16 am

@ Everyone- I might bring some candy if were allowed and im going to bring BBQ chips my favorite :-D

Mr. Hong link

10/30/2013 12:18:40 pm

@ SwaggerPuffBoy - Bring whatever you like! Avoid anything with nuts!

destiny1445

10/30/2013 01:17:21 pm

@mr.hong are we allowed to bring stuff with nuts? like oh henry bars???

destiny1445

10/30/2013 01:25:48 pm

A paraphrase is a sentence that sounds the same but in your own words

Greg Heffley

10/31/2013 01:08:11 am

@Destiny1445 Mr. Hong said avoid nuts up above so we can't bring any thins with nuts. And it is a nut free school.

Oracle

10/30/2013 12:44:48 pm

I thought your favorite was KETCHUP Chips...
Get it? KECTHUP ==> CATCH UP... :D

:l

swaggerpuffghost (halloween version)

10/30/2013 02:15:59 pm

haahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! @ oracle my captials are not working?

Juliette

10/30/2013 11:59:56 pm

HAHAHA that is really funny!!

xLio

10/30/2013 09:33:36 am

Fifth

Yogi Bear

10/30/2013 09:51:37 am

@everyone

I'm bringing sugar cookies and enough for the whole class.

xLio

10/30/2013 09:58:59 am

Fill out the form Icestone gave us

Mr. Hong

10/30/2013 10:19:50 am

@ everyone - the website should be updated by 6:30pm!

lnhlz

10/30/2013 11:04:23 am

im gonna bring chips.

Pancake

10/30/2013 11:15:06 am

Maybe you should write it on the form.
@ LNHLZ

lnhlz

10/30/2013 11:07:20 am

Is any body allergic to any thing and what is it?

Mr. Hong link

10/30/2013 12:19:12 pm

@ Everyone - Avoid bringing anything that contains nuts!

Pancake

10/30/2013 11:53:10 am

A summery is a shorter version of the original piece of writing with only the important information and in your own words. A paraphrase is the same length and about as long as the original piece of writing but in your own words.

Gamer

10/30/2013 12:01:42 pm

A summary is gust the The idea of it but a paraphrase is all of it so The summary would be one sentence but The paraphrase would be a paragraph

Pancake

10/30/2013 12:05:00 pm

@ Gamer
Remember you periods.

Tarantula

10/30/2013 12:08:43 pm

A summary is one or two scentences only telling the details about the paragraph. A paraphrase is restating the paragraph in your own words.

Mr. Hong link

10/30/2013 12:20:01 pm

@ Tarantula - What if you were summarizing a book? Would the summary only be one sentence long?

Spongebob

10/30/2013 12:13:35 pm

The difference between a summary and a paraphrase are summaries only point out the most imortant details, and is shorter. Paraphrases are all the information, in your own words, and are usually the same length.

cloud barston

10/30/2013 12:13:42 pm

a paraphraise is when you take a paragraph or sentence and put it into your own words. a summary is when you take a story or a paragraph and explain the main points of it.

jUDY mOODY link

10/30/2013 12:25:05 pm

A summary is a shortened version of the original writing piece. It is where you only include the main ideas, instead of extra detail.

A paraphrase is where you need to add more detail and description to your writing. Usually paraphrases are either the same or longer than the original paragraph.

Judy Moody link

10/30/2013 12:27:28 pm

<Revised>

A summary is a shortened version of the original writing piece. It is where you only include the main ideas, instead of extra detail.

A paraphrase is where you need to add more detail and description to your writing, and make it your own. Usually paraphrases are either the same or longer than the original paragraph.

Mr. Hong link

10/30/2013 12:31:44 pm

@ Everyone - What did you think of the ghost video?

Mr. Hong link

10/30/2013 12:43:51 pm

@ Everyone - Be honest.....did it scare you?

ATV BOY

10/30/2013 02:12:21 pm

It was such a popup I did not notice it and when I heard it I had my face up close to hear it and when it screamed I dropped my phone and farted. Haha

xLio

10/30/2013 02:26:35 pm

@ ATV BOY - Um...That's disturbing...there are about 1000 views on this website. Just tell everyone that you farted...

@ Mr. Hong - The video specifically says "WARNING: This video has shocked and disturbed viewers. If you have a heart condition or there are children about, please DO NOT WATCH." And I think we are children.

ATV BOY

10/30/2013 02:40:55 pm

@lio Well... I got to tell everyone my moments....

ATV BOY

10/30/2013 02:42:52 pm

@Lio- Also, your nagging my about farting your the one who is dead but... Yet to be still posting :I

Spongebob

10/30/2013 02:52:25 pm

Honestly I'm not scared of ghosts but I think you were trying to give us heart attacks, that was pretty freaky.

Oracle

10/30/2013 12:45:53 pm

I thought it was fake since I hate popups and it scared me off a STOOL. I could have injured my knee of insult :(

xLio

10/30/2013 02:08:48 pm

I watched it on high volume because my speakers weren't working and I fixed them in the middle of the video then they got to that shrieking part and I died.

Ichigo

10/30/2013 12:39:06 pm

Happy I didn't have sound on.

Paraphrase: It uses the same topic but different words

Summaries: They are brief paragraphs, and they explain the main topic of the paragraph.

Mr. Hong link

10/30/2013 12:57:11 pm

@ Ichigo - Did you include 2 points for paraphrases?

Ichigo

10/30/2013 01:00:58 pm

@Mr.Hong- Yes because:
Paraphrases:
1. It uses the same topic as the paragraph.
2.You have use your own words.

Summary:
1. They are brief paragraphs.
2. They are only explaining main ideas of the topic

Oracle

10/30/2013 01:22:12 pm

Mr. Hong typing mrhongsclass.com doesn't work anymore it just leads me to a blank page with its url saying ww1.mrhongsclass.com

Oracle

10/30/2013 12:39:55 pm

*Before I say my post for the post a response I just wanted to say that THE VIDEO WAS SO SCARY IT MADE ME FALL OF MY STOOL AND INJURE MY ARM AND IT WAS A POPUP AT THE END AND THE SHADOW SCARED ME!!!*

A summary is a shorter and quick exclamation of a paraphrase.

ORIGINAL EXAMPLE: The war of 1812 had been placed long years ago when roman's exist.
SUMMARY EXAMPLE: The war of 1812 was when roman's had still existed.

A paraphrase is a paragraph that was restated in your own words.

ORIGINAL EXAMPLE: Her life spanned years of incredible change for women.
PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE: Mary lived through an era of liberating reform for women.

Oracle

10/30/2013 01:20:38 pm

Check my website out! I'm still developing it. http://oraclediv4.weebly.com/

Ichigo

10/30/2013 12:41:53 pm

@Everyone- Check out my new and improved version of my website http://ichigodiv4.weebly.com/

Gamer

10/30/2013 12:42:31 pm

Will bring popcorn ....... yummy

Ichigo

10/30/2013 12:46:13 pm

I know a way scarier reaction video.

Gaia

10/30/2013 01:15:49 pm

A Summary is when you include the main points and is regularly shoter than the original.
A Paraphrase is when you have all the details but in you own words and usually is about the same length.

destiny1445

10/30/2013 01:21:32 pm

oh my gosh the video scared me I jumped and yelled then my mom got mad at me also I watched it at night and it was dark in my house and then my brother snuck up on me and said "BOO!!!!!"

destiny1445

10/30/2013 01:23:32 pm

A summery is a shorter version of a pharagraph or story with only the main idea and no details or very little.

Mr. Hong link

10/30/2013 01:28:42 pm

@ Destiny1445 - Please re-read the criteria for tonight's post. :-) Also, double check your spelling (summary and paragraph).

SAM

10/30/2013 01:43:02 pm

Paraphrase is a short version of the paragraph. Basically just a four to five sentences about the paragraph.

Summary is basically a few sentences about the main topic / THESIS statement. The main idea is what I'm saying.

Mr. Hong link

10/30/2013 02:13:06 pm

@ SAM - Are you sure? Please read through some of the other responses and do some research. Repost after you have done so.

Yogi Bear

10/30/2013 01:58:16 pm

The difference between a summary and a paraphrase is a summary is a couple of sentences of the important things in the paragraph. A paraphrase is like a paragraph made more descriptive and only a tiny bit shorter.

Summary

1.) A summary has only the important things in the paragraph.
2.) It does not have needless details.

Paraphrase

1.) Almost the same length as the paragraph.
2.) Practically just a rewording of the paragraph.

xLio

10/30/2013 02:24:11 pm

Summaries and paraphrases have a bit in common and a few differences. A summary is basically only taking out the important key points and a paraphrase is the same paragraph or essay but in different or your words.

Summary:

1.) A summary includes the key points
2.) A summary does not have to include support

Paraphrase
1.) A paraphrase includes almost the same amount of words as the original.
2.) I still has to have the original paragraph's or essay's meaning just worded differently.

xLio

10/30/2013 02:31:26 pm

Example:

Original - I watched it on high volume because my speakers weren't working and I fixed them in the middle of the video then they got to that shrieking part and I died.

Summary - I watched it so loud I died. (is this too short?)

Paraphrase - I viewed the video on extreme volume because the sound wasn't working and so I fixed my speakers during the video and then the screaming part played...I then passed away. (or ATV BOY's version - I then passed gas)

SwaggerPuffGhost (Halloween version)

10/30/2013 02:24:28 pm

A paraphase is a paragraph with your own words. A summary is a paragraph where you can change it to your other own words. Also
@ Mr.Hong-That video scared me I was close to the screen! :'(

ATV BOY

10/30/2013 02:38:24 pm

The difference between a summery and a paraphrase is that a summery is the one that is short but tells the main parts of a story, also, a summery is the one that is around 2 sentences. A paraphrase is the one that is more than 2 sentences and it is the one that tells a lot about the story and with a lot of detail.

Teddy bear

10/30/2013 02:39:28 pm

A summary is one or two sentence using details about the paragraph. A paraphrase is rewriting using own words.

Juliette

10/30/2013 11:56:23 pm

A summary is 2-3 sentences. It Los just states the main idea
A paraphrase is taking a piece of writing and re-writing it. It includes the whole thing not just the main idea.

P.S I jumped and screamed when I watched the video. I also showed it to my dad and he jumped.

Fish Sticks

10/31/2013 12:31:19 am

The difference between a summery and a paraphrase I think is simple. A summery is way shorter than the original thing and does not have all the details just the key idea. A paraphrase is about the same size as the original and ahs all of the details but put into your own words.

Greg Heffley

10/31/2013 01:03:23 am

A summary is a paragraph that sums up the main ideas for a book or movie or piece of writing. A paraphrase is a piece of writing or speaking that is about the same length as the original copy but put in your own words.

Princesa

10/31/2013 01:16:51 am

A summery is a explanation of a story or a novel that you shorten to 1-2 sentences.
A paraphrase is when you change the words in some thing and make it your onen.

theoverseeker link

10/31/2013 01:17:36 am

A summary is basically as the name implies is summing up all the key points or idea's from a paraphrase in a one or two sentence structure. Where as a paraphrase is basically the same thing as the summary you are still writing about the same thing but the paraphrase is a even greater with more detial than the summary.

lnhlz

10/31/2013 01:22:11 am

A summary is a shorter version of a parahgrahp

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