WRITER'S WORKSHOP

1/24/2017

Obvious to me, Amazing to Others

Today, you participated in a writer's workshop given by Mr. Redican. It was great to see how excited and motivated you all were to write about a topic of your own choosing. Mr. Redican has a lot of fun and exciting things to teach you over the next three months! You are lucky to have him as a teacher!

1.) MATH: No HW

2.) SCIENCE:

Test tomorrow on 'LIFE CYCLE OF STARS'
If you forgot your handout at school, please click here.
Go to YouTube and search out 'LIFE CYCLE OF STARS' for extra review.

POST A RESPONSE:

Think of two students in the class you do not ever get a chance to talk to.
Give both of them compliments or words of encouragement! Remember, read through the comments already posted to see if some students haven't received any.
Make sure to give comments to students who haven't already received some.
Thank the students who leave you comments.
Have a wonderful day!

VIDEO LINKS:
Obvious to Me, Amazing to Others

Mr. Hong

1/24/2017 05:17:23 pm

@ Everyone - FIRST! ;-)

Shmil

1/24/2017 05:35:35 pm

Second!

Shmil

1/24/2017 05:36:06 pm

Nice one, Mr Hong!

Richard

1/24/2017 08:26:47 pm

I call hax!

Shmil

1/24/2017 05:42:01 pm

Elenoa - I like how you draw eyes. Its very creative, and you are very smart and kind. By the way, hope you get well soon! ( σ ω σ )

Tyler - You solve rubix very quickly and I cant lol. Also, you are very smart. You help people when they need help.

Elenoa

1/25/2017 05:52:45 pm

@ Shmil - Thx! I love when I see you talk and laugh to other and socialize with peers. It makes me happy to see you enjoy yourself.

Logan

1/24/2017 05:42:39 pm

Tamim: I think your hair is very stylish!

Dotta: ai think you are very good at drawing and you are very smart!

Shmil

1/24/2017 05:44:10 pm

You spelled I wrong, but good job!

Jaci

1/24/2017 05:54:53 pm

Wow thanks Logan!!!!

Tamim

1/24/2017 10:56:56 pm

@logan
Thank you 💯

Jaci

1/24/2017 06:05:11 pm

🌟🍼👶🏻Classmates👶🏻🍼🌟

🏀Logan🏀

You are really funny and a good daber and I like how you are confident of when you give your opinion even if you might get in trouble because of that certain opinion and you are really good at every subject!!!.

🎬Amir🎬

I like how you are active in the class and how you raise your hand sometimes in class because every opinion matters!!! and you are really smart. And I like how you like the movie Suicide Squad just like me!!!

Logan

1/25/2017 04:22:33 pm

Thank you so much Jaco.

Mr. Hong

1/24/2017 06:15:31 pm

@ Conner - I really like when you share your learning in class! Take pride in what you learn whenever possible! Keep working hard and learning lots!

@ David H - I really appreciate how helpful you are whenever I need assistance with anything in class. Thank you!

Jaci

1/24/2017 06:22:28 pm

Yay good job MR.Hong

Mr. Hong

1/24/2017 10:02:17 pm

@ Jaci - Thanks!

Jaci

1/24/2017 06:29:26 pm

Ooooo I'm 3rd since no one claimed the spot as 3rd!!!!

Shmil

1/24/2017 06:37:08 pm

Lol okay, Dotta XD

Jaci

1/24/2017 06:41:23 pm

Lol 🌚🌝

Mr. Redican

1/24/2017 06:53:07 pm

@Jacob I really like it when you ask me a question about math, but then you solve it yourself! You have a very mathematical brain :).

@Xaviery I really appreciate it when you contribute to class discussions! Be confident and ask questions :).

Jaci

1/24/2017 06:57:23 pm

Yay Mr.Redican!!

Xaviery

1/25/2017 07:41:24 am

@Mr. Redican - Thank you, I will do my best!

ben

1/24/2017 07:49:23 pm

Ozem
I like how you always say you want to play some smash.

Ali
I like how you can be the translator and actually help.

Richard

1/24/2017 08:25:41 pm

When you said Ali can "actually" Help xD

Shaan

1/24/2017 08:23:10 pm

1.) Shmil you are the best at drawing. I like the people you draw they look amazing.

2.)Avy I like your basketball skill, and you are one of the best soccer players I know mostly at center back.

Richard

1/24/2017 08:24:56 pm

Dyamontae: You're really bad to the bone and good a roasting people's hairline.
Shaan: You are really good at soocer and running.

Jesse

1/24/2017 08:27:23 pm

Ozem really good at basketball. I hope you feal beater.

Tyler you are also good at basketball.

Vera

1/24/2017 08:32:16 pm

Lol I like how no one said anything about me I'm too scotial

Jaci

1/24/2017 08:35:32 pm

Please don't be negative someone will say your name just be patient and don't be sad please!!! 😱😰

Mr. Hong

1/24/2017 10:03:35 pm

@ Vera - Yes! I agree with Jaci. Wait for everyone to post!

Vera

1/25/2017 06:47:05 am

Don't worry I feel fine :)

David H

1/24/2017 08:55:11 pm

Shmil

Very artistic and very talkative

Ali

1/24/2017 09:13:21 pm

THE PEOPLE THAT I DON'T GET A CHANCE TO TALK TO IS
====================
BEN: his nice to me and other friends
====================
SHAAN: he is so good at soccer ⚽️ and nice to people

Avy

1/24/2017 09:38:13 pm

Shaan: Your the best at soccer in he whole school,you can play all the whole game and probably score a 4

Jaci:I don't know you that much but I do know your a wonderful artist, your art stands out to me

Jaci

1/24/2017 09:40:02 pm

Thanks Avy!!! by the way I see you in gym and you are real good at playing basketball

Chance

1/24/2017 09:47:27 pm

Ha I'm third again. No one said third

Jaci

1/24/2017 09:57:16 pm

I did tho ;(

Chance

1/24/2017 10:01:13 pm

@jaci sorry

Chance

1/24/2017 10:00:44 pm

I mean 4th

Jaci

1/24/2017 10:30:19 pm

It's fine I can be forth and you can be third!!

Chance

1/24/2017 09:56:40 pm

I talk to almost everyone.

Abdul: He is very cool and good at colouring.

Tyler: Second biggest savage ever, and the best at basketball.

Chance: Awesome, Handsome, Very cool, Funny,The second best football player beside Odell Beckham jr.,The second best basketball player., Super smart, best at art, Strongest person ever, Chance is also THE G.O.A.T,Most Savage.

DavidR

1/24/2017 09:59:48 pm

Vera-i like how toubdraw dragons,i rhink its really creative and cool.

Jesse-I thonk that you are very smart and good at soccer,but stay away from possibly injuries for you knee.Hope tou feel good :)

Chance

1/24/2017 10:04:36 pm

@David R. Check the dictionary I don't think thonk is a word or rhink,toubdraw. Your welcome

Chance

1/24/2017 10:05:24 pm

Or tou

DavidR

1/25/2017 08:10:17 am

Im really bad at spelling or it was just autocorrect.

Richard

1/25/2017 03:42:57 pm

Auto Correct? Bulldroppings. No phone would ever auto correct something into that dumb.

Jaci

1/24/2017 10:30:49 pm

Yay Vera's name got mentioned yayyyy!!

Vera

1/25/2017 06:48:45 am

Thank you DavidR

Chance

1/24/2017 10:00:21 pm

This proves I talk to everyone nobody wrote about me.

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Mr. Hong

1/24/2017 10:04:48 pm

@ Chance - I really like how you work hard to reach your goals!

Chance

1/24/2017 10:06:43 pm

Huh? I thought my goal was to raise my hand?.😕

Jacob

1/25/2017 06:22:49 am

David R Cause him and Richard see fun to play with out side
Chance Cause he's funny, and he's helping us get a crown chest in clash royal
Abdoul Cause he dose a good colouring job
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Vera

1/25/2017 06:51:25 am

Hhmmmmm I can't I'm too social too adults and kids my age >:( can't think of people to write about.

Dyamontae

1/25/2017 07:18:28 am

@jared I think you are very smart an good at science

@jess I think you are very funny and fast an good at soccer

Vera

1/25/2017 08:04:02 am

Oi thanks dude

Tamim

1/25/2017 07:33:41 am

@jesse-you are really good at soccer and at running
@vera-you are very good at drawing one of the best ones in our school

Vera

1/25/2017 08:04:36 am

Thanks tamim

Ashley

1/25/2017 07:46:36 am

Elenoa
She is sweet and a pro at basket ball! She is also a good friend to Jasmine and Me
Jasmine
She is Funny and likes Tigers. Like me, she is awesome.

Elenoa

1/25/2017 05:50:27 pm

@ Ashley - Aww... Thx ! I like how you like how you make good choices and has a passion for art.

Jared

1/25/2017 07:52:08 am

Dyamontae - You are a really good football player and I hope you keep your skills.

@Tamim - You are a very smart kid tamim. KEEP IT UP ;D
I rushed this I'm sorry

Vera

1/25/2017 08:06:04 am

Hmm still don't know who to write about -_-

Xaviery

1/25/2017 08:06:53 am

@Jesse - You're really fast at running
@Conner - I didn't know you're smart at some subject, keep it up, Conner!

Vera

1/25/2017 08:08:33 am

Jacob you are a smart kid

Chance you have nice clothe choices

brendan

1/25/2017 08:54:59 am

ben you are a smart and funny sometimes

conner

1/25/2017 08:59:02 am

shmil i think you are nice kind funny and very good at drawing

brandan

1/25/2017 08:59:58 am

chance you are nice and good at football

Richard

1/25/2017 03:44:01 pm

Is it Brenden or Brandon?

Mr. Hong

1/25/2017 09:15:28 am

@ Logan - I really appreciate how you always stick to your beliefs and have opinions that make people think! This will take you far in life and I think you will be successful in the future. I can see you being a lawyer! :-)

Also, I think you're an awesome dancer!

Logan

1/25/2017 04:26:12 pm

OMG than you mr.hong!!☺

That is the nicest thing anyone said to me today

Vera

1/25/2017 03:22:19 pm

First also Mr. Hong are you going to post?

Shmil

1/25/2017 04:58:00 pm

@Vera - We don't say first unless he posts lol

Jaci

1/25/2017 05:08:46 pm

I'm gonna draw while waiting for the next post lol

Shmil

1/25/2017 05:09:45 pm

I bet it'll look awesome! Show me the drawing tomorrow 😍👍🏻

Jaci

1/25/2017 05:10:44 pm

Ok I guess 🌝🌚

Shmil

1/25/2017 05:13:49 pm

🌝🌝🌝🌝🌝🌝🌝🌝🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌝🌝🌝🌝🌝🌝🌝🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚✌🏻👍🏻✨✨✨

Jaci

1/25/2017 05:13:27 pm

Mr.Hong when can we do digital art???

Shmil

1/25/2017 05:14:30 pm

I'm wondering about that too

Jaci

1/25/2017 05:16:12 pm

Lol are you waiting for the next post too because I am 🌝🌚

Shmil

1/25/2017 05:16:44 pm

Yeah, I am XD 🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂

Jaci

1/25/2017 05:17:32 pm

Hehe

Elenoa

1/25/2017 05:48:55 pm

Ozem - I like how your are open minded and honest to everyone .

Branden - I like to see you participate in class it makes me so happy!

Jaci

1/25/2017 05:57:55 pm

Good job Elenoa by the way I hop you feel better!!!

Shmil

1/25/2017 06:32:55 pm

When is Mr. Hong posting? I mean, will he even post? 😐🙄

Jaci

1/25/2017 06:34:28 pm

Shmil

1/25/2017 06:36:45 pm

Time is running out 😱😨😰

Jaci

1/25/2017 06:34:58 pm

I mean ikr

Shmil

1/25/2017 06:41:09 pm

Oh well I guess Mr. Hong isn't posting 🤡😂

Jaci

1/25/2017 06:42:53 pm

Seems like it

Mr. Hong

1/25/2017 06:42:57 pm

@ Shmil - Hmmmmm. Remember that I have until 7pm. :-)

Jaci

1/25/2017 06:47:10 pm

Yay

Shmil

1/25/2017 06:53:19 pm

@Mr. Hong - Then I guess there's no PAR? 😮

Dirty Dan

1/25/2017 06:46:28 pm

THE HELIX FOSSIL HAS SPOKEN!
+20 HP
+55 Attack
+55 Sp. Attack
-1500 Speed

Jaci

1/25/2017 06:50:25 pm

It's almost 7:00

DavidR

1/25/2017 09:42:46 pm

OOTS

Ozem

1/26/2017 08:28:41 pm

Tamim

I like Tamim because everyday he makes us laugh by doing funny things. He also looks great with yeezys and the pants he wears to school.

Ben

I like Ben because he is one of the smartest people in the class and really kind.

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